Englisch Dialog - ich bitte um verbesserung

Yes it is true, i have divorced my HUSBAND and paula lives with me,now. I noticed that she DOESN`T feel good in school and so I HAVE taken her out of school. now i give her private lessons at home and in my opinion she learnS much more with me than in school.


I think paula doesnt like to go to school. When she came home she was often sad. also she DIDN`T meet any friends.

I tried to talk to her but so often she avoided talking to me.

is is like a sore(? was möchtest du hier sagen?)- at home she can concentrate more on teaching.Also she is very industrious(?) because she supportS me in the household. often i have to work and then I come home and CHECK what she has done the whole day.I m Yes it is true, i have divorced from my man and paula lives with me,now. I noticed that she dont feel good in school and so I had taken her out of school. now i give her private lessons at home and in my opinion she learn much more with me than in school.

I think paula doesnt like to go to school. Often when she came home she was sad. also she doesnt met her friends.

I tried to talk to her but so often she has avoided it.

is is like a sore- at home she can concentrate more on teaching materials.Also she is very industrious because she support me in the household. often i have to work and then I come home and control what she has done the whole day.always I m always very suprised.

I did not dare to tell you these facts,beacause i didnt know whether you still love me. I was scared about your answer.

dankeschön ;)

Zitat:
is is like a sore(? was möchtest du hier sagen?)- at home she can concentrate more on teaching.Also she is very industrious(?)

und hiermit wolltea ich sagen: es ist wie ein wunder- zu hause kann sie sich mehr auf den unterrichtsstoff konzentrieren. sie ist auch sehr fließig.....