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Hey.

Wäre cool wenn jemand diesen Text hier so halbwegs berichtigen könnte vor allem von der Grammatik her:

Since 1995 Barbara Jany is a so-called: "Bad Mother".
She left her family because she had relationship problems. But she found mothers in a similiar situation an communicated with them. There was a big interest in sharing and support.So Barbara decided to write a book about "Bad Mothers" and later she published it. At last many mothers in the same situation like barbara had a book which they could use to get a good piece of advice. "A chld belongs to the mother". very often mother, who left her child get to hear comments like these.Open critism and the unsopekn arises is a big problem for some women. often we forget,thje child has a father, too. Why he shouldn´t be able to educate the child with much love? If a father leaves children it will be tolerated and accepted.certainly a woman doesn`t like to leave their children. often she not wants to break theier children away from familiar environment...
Frage von SHEEP_chen (ehem. Mitglied) | am 22.09.2010 - 22:25


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Antwort von SHEEP_chen (ehem. Mitglied) | 22.09.2010 - 22:28
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ch schnell geschrieben hab sind auch n paar rechtschreibfehler drin. also tut mir leid wa... darauf bitte nicht so sehr achten


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Antwort von Geissbock | 23.09.2010 - 05:34
Since 1995 Barbara Jany is a so-called "bad mother". She left her family because of problems in her relationship. But she found mothers in a similiar situation and communicated with them. There was a big interest in sharing and support. So Barbara decided to write a book about "bad mothers" and later on she published it. At last many mothers in the same situation like Barbara had a book which they could use to get a good piece of advice. "A child belongs to his mother". Very often mothers, who left their child get to hear comments like these. Open criticism and the unspoken arises (?) are a big problem for some women. Often we forget the child has a father, too. Why shouldn´t he be able to educate the child with much love? If a father leaves his child it will be tolerated and accepted. Certainly a woman doesn`t like to leave her child. Often she doesn`t want to take her child away from familiar environment ...


Bist du in der 10 oder 11? In der Oberstufe sollte dein Englisch zumindest anders aussehen; versuch mal längere Sätze zu bilden und schlag ein paar Vokabel nach, um deinen Wortschatz zu erweitern.

 
Antwort von GAST | 23.09.2010 - 10:10
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Since 1995 Barbara Jany has been a so-called "bad mother". She left her family because of problems in her relationship. But she found mothers in [---]similar situations and communicated with them. There was a big interest in sharing and support. So Barbara decided to write a book about "bad mothers" and later on she published it. At last many mothers in the same situation like Barbara had a book which they could use to get some good piece of advice. "A child belongs to his mother". Very often mothers who have left their children get to hear comments like these. Open criticism and the unspoken arises (?) are a big problem for some women. [---] we often forget that the child has a father, too. Why shouldn´t he be able to educate hischild with much love? If a father leaves his child it is tolerated and accepted. Certainly,a woman doesn`t like to leave her child. [---] she often doesn`t want to take her child away from his/her familiar environment ...


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Antwort von SHEEP_chen (ehem. Mitglied) | 23.09.2010 - 10:40
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Bist du in der 10 oder 11? In der Oberstufe sollte dein Englisch zumindest anders aussehen; versuch mal längere Sätze zu bilden und schlag ein paar Vokabel nach, um deinen Wortschatz zu erweitern.


ich bin 12. Klasse. Bin aber in Englisch nicht wirklich so gut und habe da halt Probleme in der Grammatik. Ich muss daran noch dringend was ändern, da hast du Recht ;)
Danke für eure Hilfe.


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Antwort von rienie (ehem. Mitglied) | 24.09.2010 - 15:31
ich würde sagen with as much love as the mothers oder so etwas.... und if a father leaves his child.. often she doesn`t want to...
und bei diesem satz
At last many mothers in the same situation like barbara had a book which they could use to get a good piece of advice.
ist es schwer zu verstehen was du meinst.. also ich finde dasa like barbara finde ich passt da nicht hin...

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