Englischtext - ich bitte um Berichtigung

Since 1995 Barbara Jany is a so-called "bad mother". She left her family because of problems in her relationship. But she found mothers in a similiar situation and communicated with them. There was a big interest in sharing and support. So Barbara decided to write a book about "bad mothers" and later on she published it. At last many mothers in the same situation like Barbara had a book which they could use to get a good piece of advice. "A child belongs to his mother". Very often mothers, who left their child get to hear comments like these. Open criticism and the unspoken arises (?) are a big problem for some women. Often we forget the child has a father, too. Why shouldnŽt he be able to educate the child with much love? If a father leaves his child it will be tolerated and accepted. Certainly a woman doesn`t like to leave her child. Often she doesn`t want to take her child away from familiar environment ...


Bist du in der 10 oder 11? In der Oberstufe sollte dein Englisch zumindest anders aussehen; versuch mal längere Sätze zu bilden und schlag ein paar Vokabel nach, um deinen Wortschatz zu erweitern.

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Bist du in der 10 oder 11? In der Oberstufe sollte dein Englisch zumindest anders aussehen; versuch mal längere Sätze zu bilden und schlag ein paar Vokabel nach, um deinen Wortschatz zu erweitern.

ich bin 12. Klasse. Bin aber in Englisch nicht wirklich so gut und habe da halt Probleme in der Grammatik. Ich muss daran noch dringend was ändern, da hast du Recht ;)
Danke für eure Hilfe.