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Schule: Fachoberschule
Klasse: 11 - Gestaltung
Fach: Englisch
Art: Vortag auf Englisch
Thema: Turm von Pharos

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The Lighthouse of Alexandria, Pharos of Alexandria or Tower of Pharos was a lighthouse built in 300 B.C also for over 1.500 years ago on a little Island called Pharos in the Harbor of Alexandria.


Pharos is a small Island with a man-made causeway form the Island to Alexandria.

The Lighthouse was 120 till 160 meters high and weighs over 60 Tons.
The Tower was consisted of Stone, Granite and Marble.
The cost for the Pharos was about 800 Talents or over 9 Million Euro.
The building was 20 years under consruction.
Alexander the great designed the Lighthouse, but he died before he can complete the construction.
20 years later was the Tower of Pharos redesigned by the Greek architect Sostratus of Cnidus.

It was about 1.000 years the tallest man-made building.
The Tower is one of the seven Wonders of the Ancient World.
The Tower needed to burn timber, oil and bitumen.


The lighthouse was hit by a earthquakes in 950 and 1200 A.D.
In the fourteen century destroy a earthquake the tower, up this time it was a ruin.

The Lighthouse is consisted of a three-stage tower, decorated with sculptures of Greek gods and mythical creatures. At the Top stood Poseidon the Greek god of the Sea and the fire.
In the Core of the first stage was a shaft to lift the fuel for the fire.
At the Top stage stood a lantern with a giant bonfire whose light may have been focused by mirrors. The Mirrors are made of polished bronze and reflected the sunlight during the day while fire was used during the night.

The Lighthouse was taller than the “Statue of Liberty” in New York.
The german tallest lighthouse is 60 meters high, also 100 meters smaller than the tower of Pharos.
The tallest lighthouse on the world today is the “Steel Marine Tower in Yokohama and is 106 meters high, also over 50 meters smaller than the lighthouse of Pahros.

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