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A comment on switching

The first advantage which could help you other peoples in emergencies.This point is very important for us.
There is on the one hand the live for peoples and on the other hand there is the unguilty .Another point to mention is the dangerousness.You can help in dangerous cases or in other situation.
Furthermore there is the aspect of the life and death a people for example if you are afraid , threatened or frightened.And last but not least there is the aspect of fun.
that is very nasty or offensive. Finally I would like to say that switching could help you in more situation.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 21.02.2010 - 14:42

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 15:09
ähhh
ja... und jetzt?^^

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 15:14
könnt ihr mein text kontrollieren
es wird benotet
danke nochmal


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Antwort von krissy09 (ehem. Mitglied) | 21.02.2010 - 15:16
was willst du mit dem ersten satz ausdrücken!ß (auf deutsch)?

A comment on switching
The first advantage which could help you other peoples in emergencies.This point is very important for us.
On one hand there is the live for/of (!?je nachdem was du sagen willst) peoples and on the other hand there is the unguilty .Another point to mention is the dangerousness (or danger!?).You can help in dangerous cases or in other situation.
Furthermore there is the aspect of the life and death[a people!?...seh den zusammenhang in diesem satz nich] a people for example if you are afraid , threatened or frightened.And last but not least there is the aspect of fun.
that is very nasty or offensive. Finally I would like to say that switching could help you in more(many!?) situations.

...steig da nich richtig durch

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 15:20
wie kann ich mein text sachlich schreiben....
könnt ihr mir dabei helfen bitte


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Antwort von krissy09 (ehem. Mitglied) | 21.02.2010 - 15:21
hmm sachlicher schreiben... ;) kannst ja mal damit anfangen deine thesen zu begründen, beispiele bringen usw damit es nach richtigen argumenten aussieht...

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 15:23
ich weiß nicht mehr was ich schreiben soll über dieses thema

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 15:59
One advantage is the helping for other people in emergencies.
This point is very important for us.
On the one hand there is the life for people and on the other hand the unguilty.
Another viewpoint which is to mention is the dangerousness.
You can help in dangerous cases or in other situation.
Furthermore there is the aspect of the life and the death a people?; for example, being afraid, threatened or frightened.
And last but not least there is the aspect of fun, which is very nasty or offensive.
Finally I want to say that switching could help you in a lot of situations.

 
Antwort von GAST | 21.02.2010 - 16:10
Wie **Money** in seinem Beitrag richtig bemerkte: Der vorliegende Text ist unkorrigierbar, da er so viele Fehler enthält.

One advantage is the helping for other people in emergencies.
This point is very important for us.
On the one hand there is the life for people and on the other hand xxxxthe unguilty.
Another viewpoint which is to mention is the dangerousness.
You can help in dangerous cases or in other situation.xxxxx
Furthermore there is the aspect of the life and the death a people?; for example, being afraid, threatened or frightened.
And last but not least there is the aspect of fun, which is very nasty or offensive.
Finally I want to say that switching could help you in a lot of situations.

alle fett markierten Stellen sind grundlegend falsch/unenglisch; bei xxxx ist der Text unvollständig/unverständlich .
Inhaltlich würde ich, wenn ich Lehrer wäre, den Text wegen der fehlenden klaren argumentativen Struktur nicht mehr als ausreichend bezeichen wollen.

ha.lo

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