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The Content of the movie

Once there was a time where magic was real, in this time an intertwined story unravels itself which brings us to the Arctic.
After a long arctic winter break a polar bear’s mother with both of her children, ravenously opens, searching for food.
Because of the climate warming the hunting grounds deliquesce more and more rapidly.
The movie shows several of the most remarkable eco systems of our planet for example a baby elephant accompanied by his mother. They conduct a weary migration through the dry Kalahari Desert. The film ends with the approach to seize measures against the global warming because by now researchers fear an extinction of the wild polar bear populations as well as other species and an increase of the ocean temperature will lead to the extinction of the krill.

Strengths & weaknesses of the movie

The movie “Earth” is one of those movies without any weakness. The amazing score is not the only reason why this movie is one of the best I have ever seen. The breathtaking captures of the scenery and from the animal kingdom look marvellous almost like a piece of art and I think everybody who likes such artistic kinds of pictures will be inspired and – as well as Mark Linefield wishes for – leaves one to appreciate earth a little more and to concede to the nature that it would have earned a more caring behaviour by us.