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I feel sad if I hear from amok runs.
School shootings is becoming more and more.
Sometimes I get fear. I think that also at our school such a thing can happen.
No school protects against amok runs.
I always felt safe at my school. Since more school shooting happens, I dont feel safe. It always can happen. You sit in your class and suddenly somebody walks in with a gun and shoots. People, who do such a thing, must be really unhappy. Other people make their life really bad. They keep their grief for himself and did not tell anything about that. They did not want to life. They think it`s the best if they kill the people who have done their lives badly.