Englisch - Definition of Globalization

Globalization is “a process, a condition, a system, a force and an age”. It is difficult to define globalization because it’s difficult to determine the origin. In order it is characterized by many facts like economy, politic, culture and interconnections. Moreover some people think that it is only a process to a new constellation named ‘planetarity’. Many questions can’t be answered, as already mentioned, where is the origin, what is driving globalization, is it an uneven process and is it a continuation of modernity or a radical break.

Many scholars tried to find answers to define the term and found during their research four additional characteristics. First, globalization creates new social networks, second, the stretching of social activities. The third characteristic is the intensification and acceleration of social exchanges. And at least globalization is not only a macro-structure. It involves also the micro-structure, the subjective plane.
The last quality is the most difficult part of globalization. Globalization influences of different levels. It depends from which country and society you live, which norms and values you care and much more. So everyone define the term globalization different because everyone perceives it differently.
All in all we can’t really find a definition of globalization. We can only see a few properties.

Ich finde es schade, dass man den Ausgangstext, nachdem man ihn hierhin kopiert hat, nicht durch ein anderes Schriftbild oder durch Farben in den vorgenommenen Korrekturen kennzeichnen kann - wie dies in anderen Foren möglich ist.
Ich kopiere deinen Text daher ein zweites Mal und nehme dort meine -leider notwendigen - Korrekturen vor.,

Globalization is “a process, a condition, a system, a force and an age”. It is difficult to define globalization because it’s difficult to determine the origin. In fact it is characterized by many facts like economy, politics, culture and international connections. Moreover some people think that it is only a process to a new constellation named ‘planetarity’. Many questions can’t be answered, as already mentioned, where is the origin?, what is driving globalization?, is it an uneven process and is it a continuation of modernity or a radical break?.
Many scholars have tried (1)to find answers to define the term and they have found four additional characteristics in their researchs. . First, globalization creates new social networks, second, the stretching of social activities (2) . The third characteristic is the intensification and acceleration of social exchanges. And at least is that globalization is not only a macro-structure. It involves also the micro-structure, the subjective plan.
The last quality is the most difficult part of globalization. Globalization influences the life of each individual on different levels . It depends on which country and society you live in , which norms and values you live for and much more(3). So everyone defines the term globalization differently because everyone perceives it differently.
All in all we can’t really find a definition of globalization. We can only see a few properties.

1) es fehlt ein typisches "Signalwort " für die Vergangenheit; also musst du hier pres.perf. einsetzen.
2) hier fehlt ein Verb! (social activities are stretched? - whatever that means; oder meinst du: social activities have undergone stress?)
3) never, never, never write "and so on" oder "and much more" in a test or say these words in an oral examination!

Entweder du weißt etqwas, dann schreibve es hin oder sage es -- oder "halte die Klappe"! Durch "usw." u.ä signalisierst du, dass du wüsstest, dass es noch mehr Punkte gäbe, die man nennen könnte, nur im Augenblick wolltest du sie nicht nennen. Jeder weiß dann, dass du nur mit nichts auf der Hand pokerst,.

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