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Me and my small family

I´ve got a daughter. Her name is Sandy. She is just seven years old, a sweet girl with brown hair and brown eyes, like me. I became pregnant when I was 17 years old . That was too early for me, my boyfriend and for my parents. First, I wanted to abort my baby, but then I spoke with my boyfriend and we decided to get it. I am glad that I didn`t have abortion.

It was Saturday and the weather was very good. My boyfriend worked every Saturday and came home about 15 a clock. Sandy and I wanted to go to the beach, swam and make a picnic there. We phoned our neighbours and asked them if they want to come with us. They have got a son, who is Sandys friend. When they told us, that they couldn’t come, Sandy began to cry. I gave her a chewing gum, because I wanted her to become quite. Then we go to the garage. I took out my beautiful new car, which I buy last week and drove to the beach. When we arrived there we ate something. Sandy played with her dolls, but for me it was very boring.

Suddenly someone stood behind me and closed my eyes. After my boyfriend said: “Surprise”, I was very happy. He gave me precious flowers and Sandy Sweets. We made our great picnic and drove home after 2 hours. What a lovely day! This must be repeated!


Danke...