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Hallo könnte mir jemand mein comment kontrollieren? Ich weiß nich ob es richtig ist weil ich die these nicht so richtig verstanden habe :/


I want to write a comment about the thesis a lot Western tourists dont know how to behave and communicate abroad, especially in third-world-countrys.
I personally think that people must be informed about the country into they drive … (was könnte man hier noch schreiben?)
In the first part of the text is a situation in this a boy don`t know what he have to do as a salesman ask him to give a price, to buy a hat. He don`t know which price he suggesting have to but one could avoid that, he could inform before like much such hats actually cost and a good price negotiate. He could prepare for it to act correctly. In the second part of the text a woman means that it is correct to haggle, because it is part of life but is it right? Humans do not earn so much money there so must then thus still around each penny haggle?
All in all the most people don`t know to behave itself like it have but that being able to avoid by one better about the country informed.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 25.02.2009 - 19:40

 
Antwort von GAST | 25.02.2009 - 19:53
um welche these geht es denn ? aber eig kann dein comment nicht falsch sein,
weil es nunmal deine eigene meinnung ist und die kann kein lehrer/buch dir vorschreiben.

allerdings hat der text nen paar grammatikalische fehler ;)

 
Antwort von GAST | 25.02.2009 - 19:54
die these steht im ersten Satz :) und was für fehler :)?


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Antwort von vanilla_s (ehem. Mitglied) | 25.02.2009 - 19:55
I want to write a comment about the thesis: "A lot of the Western tourists don`t know how to behave and communicate abroad, especially in third-world-countries".
Personally, I think that people must be informed about the country which they want to visit.
In the first part of the text there is a situation in which a boy doesn`t know what he has to do when a salesman ask him to give a price, to buy a hat. He doesn`t know which price he should suggest but he could avoid that. He should inform himself how much such hats actually cost. He could prepare for it to act correctly. In the second part of the text a woman thinks that it is correct to haggle, because it is part of life.B ut is it right? Humans do not earn so much money there so they have to haggle.
All in all most people don`t know how to behave correctly but they could avoid that by being better informed about the country.

 
Antwort von GAST | 25.02.2009 - 19:59
hoppla da hab ich glatt den ersten satz nicht richtig aufgenommen. sorry ;).

fehler : zb: I personally think that people have to be informed about the country which they visit. (into they drive ist sehr sehr deutsch)

in the first part of the text is a situation in which/that (in this kann man nicht sagen) the boy doesn`t know which price he has to pay, when the salesman askS him to name a price, for buying the hat.

 
Antwort von GAST | 25.02.2009 - 20:11
I want to write a comment about the thesis -that- a lot Western tourists dont know how to behave and communicate abroad, especially in third-world-countrys.
I personally think that people must be informed about the country -...- they -travel for example about cultural traditions-.

The first part of the text describes a situation in which a boy don`t know what he has to do when a salesman ask him to give a price, to buy a hat. He don`t know which price he should suggeste but people could avoid such situations, they could inform before like how much such hats actually cost and what would be agood price.

 
Antwort von GAST | 25.02.2009 - 20:17
hab jetzt leider keine zeit dafür,aber später vllt..

jedenfalls,solltest du "nie" den ersten satz mit "I" beginnen!
und man schreibt auch nicht "Ich möchte einen Kommentar schreiben", denn im Deutschen schreibt man ja auch nicht,nun "möchte ich einen AUfsatz schreiben..

stattdessen evtl..

The thesis "a lot Western tourists..." is in America wide-spread but is it really right/true?
..

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