Englisch Arbeit: Bewerbung und Lebenslauf für USA

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Fabian Otto



Mrs.
Andrew
Kindergarten Manager
Knowledge Learning Corporation
Dana St. 28
North Andover, Massachusetts, USA

Dear Mrs Andrew:

I am writing this application to apply for the opening you posted on Monster.com for a Kindergarten teacher assistant. I enjoy young children, have been in a kindergarten as an assistant for two weeks . Now I would like to find employment doing what I do best-assisting a Kindergarten teacher and her/his students.

I am available to meet you and the teacher I would work with.

Please call me on my cell phone: XXX to set up an interview if you are interested in speaking to me about this position. Thank you for considering my resume and this application.

Sincerely,


Fabian Otto











Fabian Otto

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OBJECTIVE
To be a kindergarten teacher
EDUCATION
2004-2005Berufskolleg Bethel Fachoberschule
Fachhochschulreife
work expirience

WORK EXPERIENCE
2002 kindergarten Lämershagen
kindergarten teacher assistant
learn to play with kids
learn to take responsibility for the kids
learn to give lessons
2002 Millennium Sports
fitness trainer
attend to a customer
to canvass customers
2004HOT Ubbedissen
deacon
talk with teenagers
child group lesson
help in the confirmation group
help in the old people`s home
OTHER SKILLS
made the big first aid course
have a JuLeiCa
was a volunteer in the confirmation work
was a group coach assistant in a Ju-Jutsu group