Las Vegas

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The population
The latest population prediction in the Las Vegas Valley is 2 million people by 2005.
The city was founded as a city on May 15, in 1905. The name of the city comes from the Spanish and means „the meadows“. Las Vegas calls yourselves as " world capital of the maintenance ". That city is a big tourist attraction. In Las Vegas the sun shines 300 days per year, it’s also very dry. You see, it’s a very sunny state.
16 bus and/or charter firms operate in the city and more than 325 limousines are available.
About 110,000 people get married there per year. At first you need the Mariage License and than you can get married very fast.
Big attractions are the Bellagio fountains (show picture), the desert passage in the hotel Aladdin and the Stratosphere Tower.

The Stratosphere Tower
The tower opened at the 3 April in 1996 and is 1,149 feet high. It’s the tallest tower west of the Mississippi. It’s higher than the Eiffel Tower in France. It takes about 2 years to build the Stratosphere Tower. In the tower are the Luxury Hotel featuring 1,500 beautiful rooms and suites and theres a very great restaurant.

Casinos/Nightlife
The nightlife in Las Vegas is so exctied! There are a lot of strip locals, casinos, pubs and clubs. In the casinos you can win a lot of money – or loose it. The addiction to play in the casinos is very high and it’s a real problem. You can play there Blackjack, Roulette or Craps.
Las Vegas is a city where every night goes party! You can have lot of fun.

Death Valley
Death Valley is located about 200 miles north east of Los Angeles. This part of California is composed of numerous arid mountain ranges interspersed with desert valleys. Death Valley lies about 50 miles east of the Sierras. It is about 100 miles long and varies in width from 5 miles to over 15 miles. Since the valley is secluded between high arid mountain ridges, it is well sheltered from any cool breezes, so the sun heats the valley floor and rocky walls to very high temperatures. During the summer months, temperatures of 130 (50 C) are not uncommon. It seldom drops below 100 degrees even in the night.
Death Valley got its name from an incident that occurred during the "Gold Rush" to California in 1849. A small expedition of gold seekers attempting a short cut to California became lost in this valley.