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Hey Leute ich soll ein summary über kapitel 6 und 7 des buches death poet society schreiben hab schon stichpunkte rausgesucht krieg die aber nicht in nen gescheiten text kann mir jemand helfen und nen text draus basteln wäre echt total lieb...

Chapter 6:

- Mr.
McAllister has a conversation with Mr. Keating at lunch time
- it`s about the lesson of Mr. Keating, because it was very unconventional
- McAllister thinks it was a crazy lesson
- Neil finds information about Mr. Keating in an old school annual and he shows it to the other boys
- Mr. Keating was once also a student at Wellton Academy
- he was a good pupil and member of a club called "Dead Poets Society"
- students ask Mr. Keating what DPS is
- he says that it is a secret underground organisation and the members of DPS read out poems of
famous poets and themselves in a cave at night
- the aim of DPS is to "sucking the marrow out of life" (in German: "um das Mark aus dem Leben zu saugen")
- after the dialogue with Mr. Keating the boys decide to meet in the cave at night
- Todd doesn`t want to come because he thinks reading out poems is very embarrassing
- but Neil says Todd that he has to read out poems
- and so Todd agrees to come
Chapter 7:

- Neil finds an old poetry anthology on his desk
- it was signed by "J. Keating" and has the inscription "Dead Poets"
- several hours later the boys start searching for the cave
- there is the first meeting in the cave
- all boys are reading poems except Todd
- he only listens to the poems
- the different poems are a symbol for the character trades, wishes and dreams of every single boy
- especially the poem Neil reads out, gives a lot of information about Neil`s character and dreams
- the next day there is another hour with Mr. Keating
- he speaks about the language and the reasons why the language exists
- then he jumps on his desk and so he has another perspective
- with this action he wants to show the pupils how important it is to look at the world in different views
- he commands the pupils to try it out, too
- so everybody jumps on the desk of Mr. Keating
- when he leaves the room he switches the light off and on and makes crazy noises which sound like thunders
- he orders the students to write a poem on their own
- knows that this task is very hard for the shy Todd and calls him a mole
- Know has fallen in love with Chris
- he drives to Ridgeway High School by bike to see Chris
- Chris makes fun with Chet
- so he is sad and pedals back to Wellton
- Neil wants to play a role in the school play "A Midsummer Nights Dream"
- the only problem is the permission from his father to take part

das sind meine stichpunkte
GAST stellte diese Frage am 16.09.2008 - 20:21


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Antwort von Evar | 16.09.2008 - 20:30
ich verstehe dein problem nicht, das sind doch schon richtige sätze! die brauchst du doch einfach nur noch hintereinander zu schreiben... und manchmal vllt 2 sätze zu einem zusammenfügen... ein par konjunktionen dazwischen und fertig;D

 
Antwort von GAST | 16.09.2008 - 20:31
da ist das problem ich kann keinen zusammenhängenden text daraus machen weil ich nicht ide richtigen wörter und konjunktionen dazu find und alles mit and ist auch doof


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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:31
Mr.
McAllister has a conversation with Mr. Keating at lunch time about the lesson which was very unconventionally. But Mr.Keating thought it was a crazy lesson. Neil found some informations abput Mr. Keating in an old schooland shown it to the other boys. The teacher was one of the students at Wellton Academy. He was a good pupil and a member of a club called "Daed Poet society". So the students asked Mr. Keating about DPS. he answered that is it a secret underground organisation where the members read out poems of famous poets at night. The aim of the DPS was it to "sucking the marrow out of life".
After the dialogu with Mr. Keating the boys decidet to meet in the cave at night. Todd doesn´t wanted to come, because he thought reading out poems is emberassing. But after Neil said he has had to come, Todd agreed.

Das is das erste Kapitel*Orden ham will*xD


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Antwort von bombi (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:32
versuche es doch einmal , danach können wir es immer noch berichtigen


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Antwort von auslese | 16.09.2008 - 20:33
naja.. genauso wie du es im deutschen auch machst..
du redest doch auch nicht in stichpunkten, oder?


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Antwort von bombi (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:33
aber grammatische fehler werden nicht belohnt :D


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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:34
okay jetz chapter 7^^


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Antwort von auslese | 16.09.2008 - 20:40
Zitat:
Mr. McAllister has a conversation with Mr. Keating at lunch time about the lesson which was very unconventionally. But Mr.Keating thought it was a crazy lesson. Neil found some informations abput Mr. Keating in an old schooland ? shown it to the other boys. The teacher was one of the students at Wellton Academy. He was a good pupil and a member of a club called "Daed Poet society". So the students asked Mr. Keating about DPS. he answered that is it a secret underground organisation where the members read out poems of famous poets at night. The aim of the DPS was it to "sucking the marrow out of life".
After the dialogu with Mr. Keating the boys decidet to meet in the cave at night. Todd doesn´t wanted to come ..., because he thought reading out poems is emberassing. But after Neil said he has had to come, Todd agreed.


.. und dann sind noch einige tippfehler..


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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:45
Neil fought an old poem anthology on his desk which was signed by "J.Keating" with the inscription "Dead Poets". Several hous later the boys started searching for the cave by the first meeting there. All boys, expcepting Todd, read the poets. Todd only listened. The different poems were a symbol for the character trades, wishes and dreams of every single boy. The poem Neil read out, gave some information about his character and his dreams.
On the next day, in an hour with Mr. Keating, he spoke about the language and the reasons why the language exist. And then he jumped on his desk and so he had an other perspective. With this action he wanted to show the pupils how important it is to look at the world in different views. He commandet them to try it too, and so everybody jumped on the desk like the teacher. When he left the room he switched the light off and on and makde noises which sounds like thunders. He ordered the students to write the poem on their own. Because he knew that the shy Todd were falling in love with Chris and the task is hard for him, the teacher drove to Ridgeway High School by bike to see Chris. Chris maked fun with Ched, so he was sad and went bach to Welltin. Neil wanted to play a role in the school play "A midsummer Nights Dream", but the problem was the permission from his father to take this part.

So, ich hoff des is einigermaßen korrekt*orden ham will* xD
Ahwa, ich hoff, es hilft dir, und du setzt dich auch nochmal dmait auseinander.
LG Maria

 
Antwort von GAST | 16.09.2008 - 20:45
egal bei mir wärn noch mehr fehler drin außerdem ist es so ziehmlich die einzig richtige hilfe die mir im mom hilft ich komm nämlich mit dem summary überhauptnicht klar


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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:46
dann entschuldige ich mich mal für die Tippfehler, hoffentlich findet sie sie und korrigiert diese selbstständig :)


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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:47
Neil fought an old...
Neil FOUND, sorry

 
Antwort von GAST | 16.09.2008 - 20:47
tipp fehler hab ich gefunden und verbessert trotz dem vielen dank du bist meine rettung

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Antwort von Marichenkaefer (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.09.2008 - 20:48
*rot werd* is doch kein problem

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