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Überprüfung auf Rechtschreibung und Grammatik benötigt

Frage: Überprüfung auf Rechtschreibung und Grammatik benötigt
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The English advanced courses believe in a wonderfoul class trip.
All the hopes were reality. After a long raining bus trip we arrived in a better wheater and we were impressed from the hostel. We found it realy modern clean. In the afternoon we search the or the "Greifswalder Bodden", but at the first time we were not celebrated. On the next da we had the chance to do a tour by bike. But I and my friend want to go swimming. On the map we search for a nice place at the baltic sea and we found Lubmin. It was wonderfoul there, so we come back relaxed. On wednesday, I think was the best day. I was the first on Rügen and it was interest to see the biggest island of Germany.

They had one big advantage: the platform was the baltic sea. It was very cold but fantastical. At the net day we had a nice day at the beach in Lubmin On Friday as we come home, we were all relaxed and happy that summer holidays starts.
Frage von lieschene (ehem. Mitglied) | am 22.08.2011 - 11:19

 
Antwort von ANONYM | 22.08.2011 - 11:44
Für die ersten Fehler, erstmal diese Korrektur:

The English advanced courses believe in a wonder foul class trip.
All the hopes were reality. After a long raining bus trip we arrived in a better weather and we were impressed from the hostel. We found it really modern clean. In the afternoon we search the (or the -- würde ich streichen) "Greifswalder Bodden", but at the first time we were not celebrated. On the next day we had the chance to do a tour by bike. But my friend and I want to go swimming. On the map we search for a nice place at the Baltic Sea and we found Lubmin. It was wonder foul here, so we come back relaxed. On Wednesday, I think was the best day. I was the first on Rügen and it was interest to see the biggest island of Germany.

They had one big advantage: the platform was the Baltic Sea. ? It was very cold but fantastical. At the net day we had a nice day at the beach in Lubmin. On Friday as we come home, we were all relaxed and happy that summer holiday’s starts.

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