Korrektur Englisch

also wie in der frage schon gesagt...ich bin kein englischexperte - wär super wenn sich das jemand mal durchliest und kurz verbessert. danke :)



Dear diary,
i still can not beleave what happend. thoughts are runnig trough my mind while at the same time I do not know what to think anyway.
I never felt like this before. It is like iam falling into thousands of tiny peaces and there is no chance that anyone will ever be able to fix me up again. Playing a role made me loose myselfe. Who am i? daddys little well-educaded muslem girl? Or the tough and sexy university student who is admired for her body and achievements?
I always taught it is easy to live in two different worlds. Changing form my shalwar kameze suit into the jeans is a thing of two minutes. Being elegant and lovely at home, rocky and wild outside.-That’s simple, that’s cool. That is what I want. So I can keep my culture without missing to have fun, -to live!
What a brilliant plan?! – Well done Miriam.
Well done, you’re the stupidest woman alive! Live is not a game. And i should have bin aware of what I put at risk. Wasn’t it clear that would end in a disaster?
I could not decide between wheter I prefer my new or my origen cultur. Now I have got to pay the price. I’ve lost the only thing i were ever sure about! – farook