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hallo.ich schreibe morgen eine englisch arbeit über summarys. jezz habe den inhalt eines zeitungsartikels zusammenzufassen und wäre dankbar wenn ihr es korrigieren könntet.


das ist der newspaaper article,den ich im forum gedownlaodet habe:
German Sports Meeting In Leipzig Had Great Success
One week Leipzig played the biggest role in German sport history. There was the 31. German sport meeting from 18. – 25. may. About 100.000 people came, played, watched and helped.
The president of the German sport federation praised: “ We have seen a great and good organized sport meeting.” And also Federal Chancellor Schröder was in Leipzig to open the big event.
Unfortunately the new stadium was not finished but everything was done to forget this little mistake. So the sport gala took place in the still cold and wet Arena. The athletes did not mind and gave their best. Everywhere they showed their performance in a lot of events from a like aerobic to y like yoga.
Not only sport was showed in this week also concerts and exhibitions took successfully place and it also was sufficient care for food . The people from outside slept in the schools and sport halls in and around Leipzig.
At the end of the week of fun and sweat the athletics left 40 million euro in the now empty and dirty town. Because of the good weather pubs and outdoor seats were full of people from Hamburg , Berlin, Frankfurt and other where.
Leipzig has shown itself from its best side and marked that this city is ready for the Olympic games in 2012.
Leipzig thanks all the helpers and everyone who did his or her part for the successfully event.

meine zusammenfassung:
in the newspaper article "german sports meeting in leipzig" had great success" (2002) by ...... deals with the sports meeting in leipzig.
on the 31.sport organisation in leipzig,which is between the dates 18.may an 25.may, there are 100.000 helpful people. one of them is the federal chancellator schröder, who have been there to watch the big organisation. altough the stadium is not finished, everyone is happy and have lots of fun. for rntertain the people and atleths, ther are events like live music. this organisation brings 40 million euro and leipzig is very happy with this result.
all in all the people in leipzig sees a very helpfull day.

ich bin mir in manchen fällen mit der zeit oder dem satzbau nicht sicher.bitte korrigiert meine fehler.
danke :D
Frage von LunchTime (ehem. Mitglied) | am 10.09.2008 - 18:52


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Antwort von LunchTime (ehem. Mitglied) | 10.09.2008 - 19:21
kann
keiner was dazu schreiben ?! :S

pls

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