Referat Moon Palace

hey ihr.. würd mich freuen, wenn ihr mein Referat ein bisschen korrigieren könntet.. ich find an manchen Stellen hört sich das irgendwie abgehakt an^^

dankeschön schon mal im voraus :)

Kitty Wu is a young woman who was born in February 1950 in Taiwan. Her father was a Kuomintang general and her mother his second concubine. Kitty spent her childhood in Tokyo and after the death of her parents, she emigrated to America. First of all the young woman was sent to a boarding school in Massachusetts, later then she went to the ballet school of Juilliard in New York. K.W. is a small woman wearing no makeup and no bra. She has silver bracelets on both wirsts and a Navaho band around her head. All in all Kitty wears clothes that positively enphasize the shape of her body. Therefore peoble are appealed by her appearance and her personality. Kitty Wu is girl bein warm-hearted and passionat. She is open to everyone and very sontaneous. That becomes clear when Kitty kisses Marco after having seen him the first time.The young girl is very ambitious, because she does not want to give up her dream of becoming a dancer. Therefore Kitty decides to have an abortion after finding out that she gets pregnant. This is very ruthless, because she does not consider Marco`s feelings. In other words the young woman knows exactly what she wants to do and she follows her impulses. Nevertheless Kitty is helpful, friendly and always in good spirts. Furthermore she never lies about anything. All in all Kitty is an affable person trying to achieve her dreams.