Kai`s Diary: Verbesserung bitte kontrollieren

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Kai`s Diary:
When Kate arrived at the station I shook her hand and said: `Hi! How are you?` She answered : ` I`m fine, and you?` I wondered why she gave me such a short answer. I told her about my day up to now and that I`m really hungry. Then we took the bus to get home.I showed her the right-hand traffic in Germany and that my home is five kilometers away. But she didn`t understand, because they count in miles and I had to commute kilometres in miles ( so five kilometres are three miles).Then we had breakfast, but Kate didn`t like or German food and she ate only Cornflakes. At 12 o`clock we had lunch. Between 4 o`clock and 5 o`clock Kate asked me if we could drink black tea, because in England was tea time now. I said that I only drink tea if I am ill, because I hate tea and the only thing I like to drink is coffee.After a short discussion she said, that she understood my point of view. Suddenly Kate fell downstairs-on her knee was a lot of blood. I desinfected her injury and tied a bandage around her knee.`What happend? Are you okay?`, I asked her. And she answered: `Yes, I`m okay! I`m fine!` She didn`t know, that the Germans say the truth.In the evening we had dinner and I hustled (schubsen?) Kate by mistake. She said `sorry` and I said it too. That seemed funny to me.