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Hallo Jungz und Mädelz,

brauche eure Hilfe.
Habe hier eine Bewerbung auf english und wollte fragen ob ihr kurz durch checken könnt ob alles in ordnung ist! wäre ganz lieb.



Personnel Department 8.3.07
Eurowide Camps
Park Street
London PT9 7AB

Dear Sir or Madam,

I read your ad last week and would like to apply for a job as a trainee Junior Camp Leaders. I have to tell you, that I havent got any experience with kids. But I think that working with kids are very interesting. My languages – I have 3 years French and 7 years English – have been very useful.

The varied training you offer, which would help me to learn about all the jobs with kids, would be very useful; I think that knowing all the jobs is important if you work with kids.

I would be grateful for the chance to meet you at an interview and look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,


Tan Nguyen