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wäre jemand so nett und würde mir den Text korrigieren ? wäre echt nett

I would like to introduce you my friend Hamza, he is sixteen and she was born in Romania.
His hair is colored blond and he has big brown eyes. Hamza has a very good trained body, because of he was tall and thin and he has trained. He always attracts a white T-Shirt or hoodie, Nike air-max shoes, jeans and a cap, we have almost the same Style. I like him because he is sporty, funny and confident and that Makes him Featured. Hamza has the same hobbies like me, swinmming, Billards and Footboll playing. he likes skateboarding, so he never goes out of his haus without his skeatboard. He is friendly, always when he comes to me at home, he brings haribo, biscuits and chips for my siblings. He has a dog named Jake and we are the ones who gave her her name. I like Hamza because he is trusting person, I talk with him every day about everything and he helps me if I have problems.
Frage von Amr18 | am 27.11.2017 - 20:22


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 27.11.2017 - 21:18
I would like to introduce you my friend Hamza, he is sixteen and she (ich nehme an, ein Tippfehler?) was born in Romania.
His hair is colored blond and he has big brown eyes. Hamza has a very good trained body, because of he was tall and thin and he has trained. He always wears (attract bedeutet z.B Mädchen anziehen oder Fliegen anziehen...) oder puts on a white T-Shirt or hoodie, Nike Air-Max shoes (Firmen- und Produktnamen immer groß schreiben) , jeans and a cap, we have almost the same style. I like him because he is sporty, funny and confident and that makes him featured. Hamza has the same hobbies like me, swimming, Billards and Footboll playing. He likes skateboarding, so he never goes out of his house without his skeatboard. He is friendly, always when he comes to my home, he brings Haribo, biscuits and chips for my siblings. He has a dog named Jake and we are the ones who gave her her name. I like Hamza because he is a trusting person, I talk with him every day about everything and he helps me if I have problems.
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that makes him featured
was soll das bitte auf Deutsch heißen?


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Antwort von Amr18 | 27.11.2017 - 21:26
Danke für ihre Hilfe, "that makes him featured for me" meinte ich eigentlich damit "das macht ihn zu einen guten Vorbild" ?


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Antwort von Amr18 | 27.11.2017 - 21:29
oder "das macht ihn besonders"


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Antwort von Amr18 | 27.11.2017 - 21:31
ich glaube besser schreibe ich "special person" hin


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 27.11.2017 - 22:10
Dann schreib: and that makes him special

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