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Korrektur einer Personenbeschreibung (Englisch)

Frage: Korrektur einer Personenbeschreibung (Englisch)
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Describe a perosn you admre. Wirte 100 words. Use the qustion to help you:

Who is  the eprosn? How do you know abou the eprosn? Giv some facts about the perosn and his or her life?Why do you admire the perosn. Give some reasons and some examples.
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I admire Cristiano Ronaldo.
The person I admire is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a football player, who plays in the league team Real Madrid and in th enational team of Portugal. Ronadlo plays as a midfielder with a size of 186 cm. He won a alot of trophies. Also is not only fast, he has a an exception shot with a speed about 100km/h. His ball controll and the free kicks distinguish him. I admire the person because he is my favourite sportsman of the world. Many people say that Ronaldo is a arrogant man, although ge spent many money to gaza . Also he paid a alot of money on sick people, to save their lifes. So I Think that Ronadlo has a good heart.
Frage von MaxMay (ehem. Mitglied) | am 04.01.2015 - 17:12


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 04.01.2015 - 17:58
Why I admire Cristiano Ronaldo. 
The person I admire is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a Portuguese professional footballer who plays  for the Spanish club Real Madridand,
also is the captain for the Portugal national team.
 
Ronaldo is an attacking midfielder with a size of 186 cm. He won a lot of trophies. He is not only fast, but he also has an exceptional shot with a speed about 100km/h. His ball control and the free kicks distinguish him. I admire this person because he is my most favoured sportsman of the world. 
Many people say, that Ronaldo is an arrogant man, although he spent a lot of money for the children of Gaza and for sick people, to save their lifes. 
So I think that Ronaldo has a good heart. 

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Antwort von MaxMay (ehem. Mitglied) | 04.01.2015 - 18:42
Vielen Dank.

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