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In the following, I’m going to describe my product. My product is a hand cream the name is Hand san ‘’2 in 1 Winter Hand creme’’. The hand cream produce in Germany. The brand is 50 years old and the meaning of san is healthy. The price of the cream is 1,25¤ of retail. In the discount, they cost 0,99¤ and at the time of winter it’ s always in offer. The most people they bought it are elderly people or they have dry hands. The cream is a blue white tube. They have a small size and the limited edition big size. The cream coming only on the winter time. The effect of the hand cream is to leave dry and rough winter hands a wonderfully delicate skin feeling. At the same time the hands with the antibacterial active substance are gently cleansed of bacteria. The cream absorbs quickly and provides 24h moisture, and they don’t have alcohol. The cream is skin compatibility dermatologically approved and it is pH skin neutral. U can buy at the all retail for example Rossmann, dm and budni

das ist was ich bis jetzt habe kann einer das nach gucken bitte