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Heyhey, kann mir bitte jemand diesen text korriegieren? Mein Englisch ist solala, und ich denke ich habe einpaar Geammatik/Logik-Fehler drinnen. Wäre lieb :)


We looked at the back of Tay straying, then I shook my head, thinking back to the fact that if that killjoy of Tom hasn`t arrived, we`d have even kissed. "How can you even blame him!" I exclaimed and turned sitting on the steps. "Do you think I`m afraid of that hater that looks only for trouble?" I watched him continue to laugh while he rearrange the shirt collar. To see him he didn`t seem at all afraid. "And why aren`t you afraid?" "But did you see me? I am not afraid of anything! " he exclaimed loudly, before sitting down beside me. "Yes, I saw. And that`s just a front. " He stared at me for a few seconds, he snorted, before taking a crumpled cigarette pack from his pocket. "You`re too philosophical. Life is much simpler. " "Life is simple?" His parents had died in a car accident three years ago, how dare he admits such a thing? "Of course, life is simple and there are only three important things in life: sleep, eat, and sex." He put his cigarette between his lips, mumbling amused "It is clear that the last is the most important." I shook my head, annoyed by his reasoning typical primate without a modicum of sensibility.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 01.11.2016 - 22:55


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 02.11.2016 - 15:36
We looked at the back of Tay straying (?), then I shook my head, thinking back to the fact that if Tom, that killjoy, hadn’t arrived, we’d have even kissed.
"How can you even blame him!", I exclaimed and turned sitting on the steps.
"Do you think, I’m afraid of that hater who (ist ja bezogen auf eine Person) looks only for trouble?"
I watched him while he continued laughing and rearranging his shirt collar.
To see him he didn’t seem at all afraid.
– Was willst Du mit diesem Satz sagen?
"And why aren’t you afraid?"
"But did you see me? I am not afraid of anything!", he exclaimed loudly, before sitting down beside me.
"Yes, I have seen it. And that’s just a front (verstehe ich nicht)."
He stared at me for a few seconds, he snorted, before taking a crumpled cigarette pack out of his pocket.
"You’re too philosophical. Life is much easier."
"Life is simple?" His parents had died in a car accident three years ago, how dare he admits such a thing (meinst Du damit: how can he dare to say such a thing?)?
"Of course, life is simple and there are only three important things in life: sleep, eat and sex."
He put his cigarette between his lips, mumbling amused: "It is clear that the last is the most important.
"I shook my head, being annoyed about this reasoning typical primate without a modicum of sensibility.

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