Englisch Characterization

Sorry, das kommt zwar etwas zu spät, aber es war einfach zu kurzfristig.
Hab mir trotzdem sehr viel Mühe gegeben und dir mal eine Anleitung dahin gezaubert.
Lies es dir einfach mal trotzdem durch, eine Charakterisierung wirst du noch unzählige mal schreiben müssen, so nervig das auch ist..

Gliederung für charakterisierung:A Name, Beruf, Freunde, Partner, FamilieB Äußere Merkmale (Aussehen, Kleidung)C Was will/macht die Person?D Verhalten/ VerhaltungssonderheitenE Aussagen anderer, die die betreffende Person kennen-> Hilfsfragen: W-Fragen auf die Person anwenden-> Wichtiges von Unwichtigem unterscheiden!Before WritingStep 1: Read the text carefully. Mark the words or sentences or write down the lines that give you information about the character(s).Step 2: Draw a chart that includes columns like situation/position, outward appearance behaviour, words/thoughts, feelings/attitudes, others reactions or if you compare characters similarities and differences and fill in your notes.Step 3: Ask yourself if the character(s) change(s) during the development of the text and if so, how.Step 4: Number your notes and group them.While WritingStep 1: Write a short introduction in which you present the character(s) and his or her (their) situation.Step 2: Organise your notes into paragraphs. Every paragraph should deal with one characteristic feature (e.g. friendliness, carelessness, imagination, etc. are all characteristic features).Present the evidence (words or sentences taken from the text that show that your interpretation is right) taken from the text and comment on it. Dont forget to refer or quote the text.Step 3: Try to show how the different characteristic features belong together.Step 4: Write a conclusion that sums up the results of your detailedAfter WritingChecklist:(1) Does your introduction lead to the detailed analyse of one or more characters?(2) Does your characterisation include all the notes that you made before starting to write?(3) Have you linked up the different aspects in a logical way?(4) Have you referred to or quoted the text?(5) Does your conclusion offer a convincing summary of what you have found?Du musst auch darauf achten, dass du das innere der Peron und das äußerde Gegliedert auflistest und nicht alles zusammenwürfelst...Ein Beispiel dazu...At first Marian’s character is described as very cool and self-confident. He always knows what to say and it seems like nothing can bother him. But in contrast he is very shy and uncertain when he is together with Ammissa. On the one hand he always tries to offend Ammissa and to make her feel bad but on the other hand he protects her when she is in danger. Marian would never admit that he feels so much for her but he couldn’t hide that he is broken-hearted about the fact that she is together with Jasper. Finally his behaviour gets brutal and cold. He feels angry and is impolite to his friends. But in contrast he behaves friendlier toward Ammissa now. Every time when she is with him he feels joyful and happy but he never shows it to her. To sum it up, Marian is a young boy who is confused about his feelings. Marian hides his feelings as good as he can and he always dubs his sensitiveness with a cool and sometimes even rude and brutal behaviour.




Puhh sorry, hab das jetzt alles aneinander geklatscht, aber es gibg gerade nicht anders habe das zum teil auch zum selbst üben genutzt.

Schöne Feiertage ;)