Englisch Hausaufgabe

Hallo, ich bin ganz schlecht im Englisch und muss bis Morgen 2 Aufsätze schreiben.Schon mal vielen dank an die,die mir helfen. Könntet Ihr das bitte auf Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler überprüfen?nochmal danke im vorraus:)



About me

Let me introduce myself. I`m OliverXXXXX , I’m 16 years old and I`m from Germany. I was born in XXXXXX and I have been living in this town since my childhood, but now I live in................

  Now, I am going to tell you about my family. We are family of 8. My father is 43 years old and is a nice guy, but he has committed some mistakes in the past. At the moment he is working in the kitchen of the prison. My mother is four years younger than he.She works in a bank. They are divorced. She has a new family. My younger brother XXXX lives in XXXXX. He is going to school and he´s is one of the best in his class.

  And finally just a few words about my four little sisters. They are very sweet and cheeky. I love them, but I can’t spend much time to play with them, because we don’t live together.   I don’t have any grandparents, they are all dead. I love my family and I wish to see them all happy.

In my free time I like to meet my friends, also I go skating and free running. One of my greatest hobbies is skating, since mychildhood I loved that. Also, I really love to make people laughing and having fun.

My favourite movie is “One missed call” with BethRaymond.

  I love dogs butI don’t have any pets.

My future plans.

First, I have to finish the school. After that, I wouldlike to study car mechatronic, because I like cars and power full engines. I wish me to find a good job and earn a lot of money. In the future I wish me a big house and a neon green jeep with an automatic gearbox with 800 HP engine.Later, I`m going to open a saving account for my kids with at list 3000 euro on there.

My town

XXXX is a town in the district of XXXXX in Schleswig-Holstein,Germany. In the center of the town there is park and a small lake, the Kirchsee. It is a small, but a nice town and I like live there. There are a lot of supermarkets, restaurants, coffee shops, banks, churches and also hospitalsand police stations. XXXXXX has today a population of 15,600. Ihave a lot of friends in the town, so   I do really feel comfortable there.