Sind die 2 Lebensläufe richtig ?

1 Lebenslauf als Reporterin
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reaply to your advertisement in "Freies Wort" of 12 January 2015.
I would like to apply for an apprenticeship in reporting at your agency.

I wm 19 years old and I will be talking my school - leaving examination in July 2015 which I hope to pass with good results. After leaving school i am interested in finding an apprenticeship in the reporting buisiness.

I fell that a carer in reporting eould suit may interest in writing report and articles.

I have been a member of a computer and a phozoclub for several year. I have already gained considerable experience eith word processing snd talking and developing photos. I would be grateful if you were able to consider me for an apprenticeship

Please find enclosed my curriculum vitae, photocopy of my last school year and the name and addresses of  two referees.

I should be glad to attend an Interview at any time which will suit you.

I look forward zo hearing from you

Yours faithfully,

STEFEZIUS
Sarah Stefezius


Encl. : CV
           copy last school report



2 Lebenslauf als au - pair


Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reaply to your advertisiment in" Freies Wort" of 10 th January 2015.  I would like to apply for the post an au - pair.

I am 19 years old snd I will be taking my school - leaving examination in July 2015 which I hope to pass witch good results. After leaving school I am interested in finding in the au psir buisiness. 

After finishing school, I eould like to stay in Great Britain for one year. I fell that a post as an au pair would suit my interests. I like working with childreen snd have already gained a lot of experience I have teo younger brothers who I often look after. I mske the breakfast for them, play eith them and help with thrm homework.  

I been a member of a working club for 5 years. I can cook really well and know a lot of recipes. Therefore,  I would  be very grateful if you were sble zo consider. 

Please and enclosed my Curriculum vitae, a photocopy of my last school report  and the nsmes and address of two referees. 

I would be very crateful for  the opportunity of a personal interview.

I look forward zo hearing from you.

Yours faithfully, 

STEFEZIUS
Sarah Stefezius,

Encl. : Cv
             photocopy andof school reporting



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