Kann bitte jmd. mein Englisch- Text korrigieren ?

Hallo liebes Forum,
Da ich in Englisch extreme Probleme haben und sehr schwach bin habe ich mich dazu entschieden meinen Text nocheinmal abzutippen um es kontrollieren zu lassen.
Ich wäe sehr dankbar für Tipps und Berichtigungen...

- Also die Aufgabe war, einen Brief an den Bürgermeister zu schreiben, der eine Abtreibungsklinik schließen will. Ich sollte mich als Chef einer Frauenorganisation dagegen stellen und argumentieren.

Dear Mr. Villareal,
Since 2004 I exert myself for legal abortion. I would like to refer in the name of my women`s health organization to her(their)planned plan position(standpoint) to close(conclude) the clinic in Rio Grande Valley. Many women thank me dearly, because they tell me,I save their future. It would be irresponsibly of these women towards who have anyway already enough problems.
1. Often they would will have to fight with moral problems if the chance is taken from them to be able to drift off(down). One may not require for a rape of a woman to have to deliver the child of a rapist. Even the child would be enormously suicide-threatened from what I have also got several times(repeatedly).
2. Also many women are still inoccupation (profession), study or school and can deliver no child. It would overthrow them(her) in a financial chaos. Our organisation helps (assists) these people for many years with this clinic. It is very often the last solution for the problems. Moreover, the chance is very high with young mothers on a handicapped child.

1. Sometimes visit me completely despairing mothers who either even are very ill, or the child carries wrong genes. The enforced birth would be able to a disaster becomes. Nobody can answer for the problems resulting from it. Everywoman must decide in own responsibility for or against her child.

1. Of the more often I am demanded by the youth welfare department that there are many irresponsible mothers who smoke during the pregnancy, alcohol drink and take drugs. A child would suffer from this sphere and take a very bad development. We would have to snatch this child from his family. I twill be able to lead no normal life.

We are the last organisation in this country which is extensively and in the narrow contact with the clinic. The closing of the clinic would lead to the greatest problems!There come every year approx. 5000 people from other far away states, because abortion was legal up to now in our state. If they also do not take away this hope of the people, please.

KEEP ABORTION LEGAL !

Greetings
Max Heuer

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