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Frage: Kann mir bitte jemand meinen Englischen Text korrigieren
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Könnt ihr mir bitte helfen diesen Text zu korrigieren


Zita Wallace was stolen from her Aboriginal family.
She came to a house for orphans. Nuns run the home. One day the nuns said, that we go shopping but they took au to a home hundreds of miles away. In the house were lots of children. They slept on a hard mattress. Nobody help they. There was a 4 year old girl who cried and cried. We must learned the languaege of the bad people. We must our generations and language forgive. The stealing of children enden after 60 years. Eleven years later,Australia is saying sorry


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Frage von flagflag | am 08.11.2013 - 17:26


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 08.11.2013 - 18:16
Zita Wallace was stolen from her Aboriginal family. She was taken to an orphanage. Nuns ran/managed/led the home. One day the nuns said, that we were going shopping but they took us to a home hundreds of miles away. In this house there were lots of children.
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They slept on a hard mattress => wohl kaum auf einer Matratze, deswegen:)
They slept on hard mattresses. Nobody helped them. There was a 4 years old girl who cried and cried. We had to learn the language of the bad people and had to forget our generations and language. The stealing of children ended 60 years later. Australia apologized another 11 years later.


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Antwort von Fehlerfinder007 | 08.11.2013 - 17:40
Kannst du vielleicht mal schreiben, was du auf deutsch sagen willst? Weil ich nicht wirklich verstehe, was du mir mit deinem Text sagen willst...


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 08.11.2013 - 17:55
@fehlerfind007: es geht wohl um dieses Politikum: http://www.creativespirits.info/aboriginalculture/politics/a-guide-to-australias-stolen-generations


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Antwort von cleosulz | 08.11.2013 - 17:58
@ fehlerfind007 ==> http://www.theguardian.com/world/2008/feb/11/australia
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Antwort von Ratgeber | 08.11.2013 - 18:16
Zita Wallace was stolen from her Aboriginal family. She was taken to an orphanage. Nuns ran/managed/led the home. One day the nuns said, that we were going shopping but they took us to a home hundreds of miles away. In this house there were lots of children.
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They slept on a hard mattress => wohl kaum auf einer Matratze, deswegen:)
They slept on hard mattresses. Nobody helped them. There was a 4 years old girl who cried and cried. We had to learn the language of the bad people and had to forget our generations and language. The stealing of children ended 60 years later. Australia apologized another 11 years later.

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