Shakespeare stundenvortrag

Vielen Dank nochmal :)
Habt ihr Vorschläge für einen Sonett?

Hier findest du eine Auflistung:

http://www.reocities.com/Athens/Troy/4081/Sonnets.html
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Wenn ich keine Probleme in Englisch hätte, würde ich hier nicht um Hilfe nachfragen.... Außerdem finde ich es sehr unhöflich zu sagen, dass es nur akzeptabel für die 4.Klasse ist... Das geht auch netter!
Trotzdem bedanke ich mich (weil ich auf Höflichkeit einen sehr großen Wert lege) für die Korrektur und die Ratschläge.....

Hello Ladys and gentlemen you are going to listen to my presentation. I want to tell you something about Shakespeare. First I want to talk with you about the possibility that he never lived. What do you think about this?
And now I want to tell you some of his important quotes. What is your opinion about the quote Doubts are traitors, they rob us of what we can win if we dare only one attempt?
An other famous citation is To be or not to be, that is the question. What can you tell about this? And the last quote what I want to tell you is If every day is a holiday fun to be so tedious as to work.
And know I explain you the story of Hamlet.
Hamlet, is the Prince of Denmark he receives, at the high school at Wittenberg, the news of the sudden death of the king, his father. He rushes home and is just right for the wedding of his mother and his uncle Claudius. This sudden change it thought provoking. At night his father`s ghost appears to him, accused of murdering his uncle and mother and asks Hamlet to avenge him. To investigate whether it is not the spirit astray, Hamlet decides to confront insane. He will rehearse from just arriving actors a piece, with its performance, he wants to catch the uncle king like in a trap, because the scene transition is like the spirit of the act of killing him portrayed. By the sudden departure of the king from the point verhänglichsten Hamlet Gewitzheit believes to have acquired. May still be hesitant to not bring to mind energy of revenge. Although, if words were daggers, so he would kill. In vain he seeks through philosophical questions about existence or non
deceive by his weakness. He rages more against themselves and against that which is dearest to him, the gracious Ophelia, daughter of chamberlain Polonius. Even when he met with the king alone in prayer, he missed the opportunity of revenge to the rapid changes in the mood to kill the listener in the chamber of the mother, but not the right, for it was the old Polonius, whom he met.
About Hamlet, the Beloved, and seeming madness of his father`s death Ophelia is really mad and drowns in the river. Her brother Laertes, just back from a trip to France raises a revolt to avenge his father and sister, but of the king, whom he believes to be the culprit, irritated against Hamlet. The Prince has been sent as dangerous according to the dependent of Denmark England. Already on the way Hamlet discovers that death awaits him in England. He sends in his place, the over zealous courtiers Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, and returns to Elsinore.
At the grave of Ophelia, he meets with Laertes. The outbreak of the dispute be settled by the king, but calls on Laertes, Hamlet to ask a few friendly corridors with the rapier to poison the tip of his weapon and thereby kill the prince. Hamlet is wounded, snatches Laertes sword pierces him and the king and dies like this, along with the mother who accidentally drank from a poisoned by King Hamlet certain cup of wine. The marching through the country young Fortinbras of Norway makes his rights to the throne of Hamlet and leaves buried with royal honors. You will become the Sonett 18 and try to Analyse this. You have got 20 Minutes for this. After that we speak about this. I will give you a guidline how you can Analyse a Sonett from Shakespeare.
Before I finished my Presentation I want to give you a quiz.
Have you got any questions?
Thank you for your attention

Zitat:
Have you got any questions?

I`ve got just one question: Where is the analysis of sonett 18?

And by the way, if you think that your Hamlet text has been written in comprehensible English, then are you on the wood-way.

Das geht auch freundlicher lieber goldenoldie. Wenn du sagst das wäre gerade akzeptabel für eine Viertklässlerin, dann ist das wirklich nicht nett und vorallem übertrieben.

Ach und mit der englischen Antwort, kann es sein, dass Sie mir eins auswischen wollen?
Falls ja Vielen Dank für die Bemühungen ;-).
Falls nein, ebenfalls Vielen Dank für die Antwort :).

JA ist okay ich mache es wieder von vorne
habe keine Probleme damit aus meinen Fehlern zu lernen
außerdem denke ich schon, dass ich meinen TExt alleine von vorne schreiben kann -ohne das jmd es für mich tut soviel traue ich mir zu--es wird andere nette Menschen geben die es verbessern und mich nicht anmachen, wobei ich mit Kritik leben kann, solange man es respektvoll zum Ausdruck bringt.

@ chriisii
Auch bei dir bedanke ich mich für die Unterstützung :). Werde mein Referat von vorne machen, außerdem soll ich doch nicht DAS ;) Sonett 18 nehmen... Jeden Tag hat sie neue Erwartungen, naya egal :). Ich schaff es schon :)