Englisch Bewerbung. Gardener

hallo ich muss morgen diesen Bewerbung abgeben. das ist mein Hausarbeit.

könnt Ihr bitte gucken ob irgendwas falsch ist oder eher besser schreiben kann =? bin mir so unsicher
wäre nett muss die morgen abgeben.

danke



13 December 2012

Elsbeth Georg
2654 Wellington Terrace
London WC5 Y123, GB

Dear Mr Georg

I see from your advertisement in the ``Jobs Monthly`` of December 2012 that you are looking for a young dynamic and knowledge for your Team.

I am presently attending a one course at the Vocational College here in Essen and I hope to finish in June of this year with my VGCE.
For this course I had to do a 48 week internship in gardens which I finished last year. This has given me some experience in the field of gardener.
Your advertisement sparked my interest, because I love working in the great outdoors. I am a highly organised and motivated professional gardener.
I have already made some Experience as a gardener in an internship last year. Of which, my tasks were to prune hedges, mow lawns. I had much fun and i gained very much knowledge.
My strenghts are, that I am a team player. I am reliable, trustworthy and very flexible. Also as a gardener I am physically fit and highly. In addition i have much experiences with different kinds of plants, working with plants inspires me and gives me a good feeling.


I hope to be considered of the position and am available for an interview at any time.

Sincerely yours