Englisch Text: Kontrollieren bitte !

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The cartoon „...“ shows five people, that each representing a different type of communication.
The different male people shows something to the effect that a time period about communication.
We begin with the oldest guy. He is small and has a bent forward bearing. The guy carves the first word in stone with a hammer. The second man to the left prints something with a book press.
He is a little bit taller and his bearing is a bit uprighter. The tallest human holds a book in his hand.
Probably he can write and read. Thus he can communicate with letters. The next to last is less than the tallest people. His bearing is crooked. He communicates with e-mails. The last man is very small and demonstrate a very crooked bearing. In his hand, he has a smartphone and he “twittert”.


The cartoon represent, that the man with the book, is the cleverst. At this time the people communicate with letters, which written by hand or type writer.
The big body-size shows in the metaphor, how much clever the people are. The man looks happy.
In contrast to the man with the hammer and the stone and the guy with the smartphone.
Both man are little, which shows in the metaphor, that they aren`t so clever as the tallest men.


In my opinion it is good as the art of communication has developed. It is very advantageous to be reachable. However, always one should not rely on SMS and E-Mail and send important things in a letter by post.