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Hallo,
wäre super lieb von euch wenn jemand meinen Text mal auf Rechtschreibfehler,Kommas usw..
und ein paar sprachlichen kleinigkeiten untersuchen könnte :)
liebe grüße

Both Romans "Before I Die" and "Veronica decides to Die" deals with the dead .
In the book "Before I Die" is the maincharkter Tessa, a joung girl. She has a terrible Illness and she must dead in a short time. On the contrary to the joung veronica who wants to die and takes suicide though she lifes a normal life, shes not content.
Tessa wants to enjoy the rest of her life although her life is not easy. A different point between both book is that Tessas Ilness is not curable and Veronica is mentally ill and curable.The joung Tessa enjoys her life and will trie to make much things. She is very brave and zielstrebig ! Veronica doesen`t anything she thinks only at suicide and this makes the girl very sensible and helpless. Only she realized that she must dead because his failed suicide she beginns to life her live.
Both girls found her big love. While Tessa is dead at the end of the book, Veronica founds back in her life and is happy.
Both books are written at the first narrator, that makes the books more personally and detaily. The reade becomes also a good insight. au0erdem The two books contain more literal speech.