Englishtext! bitte korrigieren

Hallo,

ich habe einen kleinen Text über das Recht auf Freiheit geschreiben.
Es ist nichts weltbewegendes sondern nur um ein bisschen für die Schulaufgabe (ein Teil wird eine composition sein) zu üben. Würde mich freuen wenn jemand den Text auf gramatische unreinheiten und Sinnfehler korrigieren könnte. Danke schon mal im vorraus!


„The price of freedom of religion, or of speech, or of the press, is that we must put up with a good deal of rubbish.“

Freedom of religion, of speech and of the press is necessary. There are many humans in the world fighting for these rights. Without those rights it`s hardly possible to live a life of happiness and equality. In most of the countries, where those rights are accepted, life is much better. But there are not only advantages. With this rights being accepted there are some disadvantages too. Every one would be allowed to kill an other without being sentenced. So, should there be limits of freedom?

On the one hand it`s difficult to set limits. Because with limits you attack other persons in their freedom. So maybe the other man feels suppressed and stand up to fight for his right. One man`s terrorist is the other man`s freedom fighter. With limits there will always be little fightings and discrepancies.

On the other hand, if there are not limits, there will be so much rubbish. What is science managed by religion? What will be, if every second child is thought, that evolution is rubbish and that the world was created by god in six or seven days? If there are no limits of freedom there will be chaos all over the world. Courts will be waste, because every person acts in his own freedom and cannot be sentenced

So some little limits are necessary for a better life. And not every rubbish we must put up with can`t be oppressed. Life is symbiosis of accepting and being accepted.