Aguilera, Christina: mündliche Englisch- Prüfung: Kontrolle?

Hallo Leute,

Ich halte am Dienstag meine Englisch-Prüfung(mündlicher Teil) und wollte über Christina Aguilera reden.
Nun habe ich mir einen Text ausgearbeitet, welchen ich auswendig (soweit das geht) lernen wollte. Da kommen wir auch zu meinem Problem, ich bräuchte jemand der sich den Text mal durchließt und sagt ob der so i.O. ist oder was ich evtl. noch verändern könnte.
Das wäre richtig lieb, wenn sich jemand dafür finden würde?!
Danke schon einmal im Vorraus

P.S.: Der Text:
Christina Aguilera was born on the 18th december 1980th
She is a talented dancer and singer. Also she has her own parfume line.

But her childhood was not very good. She grew up with her coming out of Ecuador`s father, her mother and little sister in Manhattan.
Her father worked for the U.S. Army and hit her and her mother almost daily, so let it be divorced when Christina was 5 years old. The three women went to the grandma in pittsburgh. In the song "Oh Mother" she thanks her mother for the strength she had for her children.

Christina had dreamed of singing always, so she attended as a child in talent competitions. They drew inspiration from Madonna, Ella Fitzgerald, Whitney Houston, later her music was influced of them.

In 1993 she moderadet the Mickey Mouse Club on the Disney Channel. The show was canceled 1994th Aguilera worked with Justine Timberlake and Britney Spears, this gave her the big breakthrough. With completion of the Mickey Mouse Club, she began to record demos and send them to record companies, they were released under the name "just be Free".

In 1999 she released her debut album "Christina Aguilera". In 2004 she married the producer Jordan Bratman in 2008 and they had their first son but 2010, they were then divorced.


Her major awards are: a star on the walk of fame, 4 Grammys, two MTV Music  and 2MTV Viedeo Awards. .
her film roles are: Burlesque (2010), and in the movie Get him to the greek,and also sang the title song of sharks tale with Nelly.

The most important albums: Christina Aguilera in 1999, stripped of the year 2002 and Back to Basic in 2006 from the album is also the single Ain `t no other man, who stood to #1 in 17 different countries.

These albums was for her career  very important because they show their image change very well. In her career as a singer she changed her image with each new album. In 1999 she was the shy and the typical Tennagerstar that sing Mulans songs for the movie. 2002 she changed that appruptly. Suddenly it was very provokate and sexy.
Her  album "Stripped" was influenced by her biography and the music of jazz, hip hop, gospel and soul. In the year 2006 she became the diva of a wicked 20s movie and so was her album managed.