Englisch Referat / Präsentation - Intel

Hallo,
ich muss nächste Woche Donnerstag in einer Gruppe ein Referat über Intel halten auf Englisch.
Dort werden sehr viele Leute sein.
Und mein Englisch ist nich grade so gut.
Würde sich vielleicht jemand die mühe machen meinen Text auf Fehler zu kontrollieren?
Weil Fehler werden sehr streng bei uns dann bewertet. Wäre echt super nett.

Esports
Ok. Now i would like to turn to the second part of esports. Some tournament games are: Warcraft 3, League of Legends , Counter Strike 1.6/Source, StarCraft and Fifa. For a tournament you need a lot of stamina, a fast reaction and a good hand eye coordination. The people train a lot to improve this, because it can decide about victory or defeat. And the people need special equipment. Everyone must adept the things on his own requirements. You need a high-end PC, a gaming mouse, keyboard and headset and maybe a mouse bungee. It’s a thing that hold your cable. Some companies are: Razor, Logitech, Thermaltake and Raptor.
Intel support this league and some teams. Intel sponsor the best pro-gamers around the world, that they get technical and other support and everything they need for victory on a world-class level.
Also they organize the Intel Extreme Masters World championship.

Ultrabook
So now I’d like to look at the Ultrabooks. Ultrabooks are a new category of devices. They look like very responsive . And they only need a little place. At the moment they are in a competition with Apple’s MacBook’s and all the other Netbooks and Tablet PC’s. They have the new i5 and i7 processors, so they boot very fast. And they have the new USB 3.0, Thunderbolt and a SSD Drive. And with their small size, only 11 to 13 inch and their weight between 1 and 1,3kg you can take them to any place. They have a resolution of 1366x768 pixel, so the picture is razor sharp. Ultrabooks can be only 21millimeter at the thickest point. The battery life time is very long. But they may not have a DVD drive or smaller hard drive. And they are produced out of carbon and aluminum that look very stylish and expensive. And they have security features: Intel Identity Protection Technology which makes online shopping, banking or playing games safer.

Competition

And the chipmaker AMD wants to create a new category of Subnotebooks with “Ultrathin”. The devices will build on the AMD Trinity chip and compete with the Chips from Intel’s Ultrabook. And they are 100 until 200 Dollar cheaper.

Ende
So, that brings me to the end of our presentation. Thank you very much for listening.


Danke Danke Danke :)