Englische Bewerbung

B: I have grown in confidence, because I`ve participated in many public trials.

I am more than capable of dealing with pressure and managing my own time, which I do professionally and without fuss. My grades at school were good, especially my grades at German, Rhetorik (?) and History. It would be a pleasure for me, if I could be a part of your company.

So würd ich das schreiben :) keine ahnung ob das 100%ig stimmt

Cool danke für deine Hilfe. Schreibt man in eine Bewerbung rein, dass die Noten gut waren in den oder den Fächern?

Ich soll nur das Schreiben machen, keine Lebenslauf oder so

Ich würde es dann so machen, was sagt ihr dazu? Könnt ihr es in ein "besseres" Englisch machen?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about the possibility about becoming employ as legal assistant in your law office.(Rechtsanwaltsgehilfe - man kann sich ja nicht als Rechtsanwalt bewerben)

I am glad about your job offer as a legal assistant, because I am interested in activity´s from a lawyer and a judge in particular the argumentation about an lawsuit.

(Ich will sagen: ich freue mich sehr über das Jobangebot als Rechtsanwaltes, weil ich interessiert bin an den Tätigkeiten eines Richters und Anwaltes,insbesondere die Argumentation über einen Rechtsstreit.)

I currently graduate class 11 in XxXXX - School.
My knowledge in German, Latein, rhetoric and history is excellent and I think I comply the necessary thrustworthiness. (Ich will ausdrücken: Mein Kenntnisstand in den Fächern Deutsch, Latein, Rhetoruc und Geschichte ist sehr gut hinzu kommt, dass ich die für diesen Beruf notwendige Zuverlässigkeit und rasche Auffassungsgabe beherrsche.)
I am more than capable of dealing with pressure and managing my own time, which I do professionally

I have grown in confidence, because I often had the chance to participate in public judicial proceedings.

It would be a pleasure for me, if I could be a part of your law office.

[quote]Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about the possibility of becoming
employed as a legal assistant in your law office.()

I am glad about your job offer as a legal assistant, because I am interested in activities ! of lawyers and
judges, in particular in the argumentation in a lawsuit.

I currently attend class 11 at XxXXX - School.
My knowledges in German, Latin, Rhetorics and History are excellent and I think I comply with the necessary thrustworthiness.

I am (1) capable of dealing with pressure and of managing my own time, which I do professionally(2)
I have grown in confidence, because I have often had the chance of participating in public judicial proceedings.

It would be a pleasure for me, to become a part of your law office.[quote]

1) zu Superman musst du dich in einem Bewerbungsschreiben nicht hochstilisieren, der Fall kann um so tiefer und schmerzhafter sein.
2)was willst du hier sagen? streichen!

You should improve you basics in English