Bitte mal drüber schauen! - Current-Event! -

Hey! ich wollte euch mal bitten ob hier mir sagen könnt ob ich alles richtig geschrieben hab, in der Zeitform geblieben, Wortwahl etc., da ich unsicher bin das ich es richtig gemacht hab. Hilft mir mal, bitte! DANKE!


At 8:42 AM on Thursday morning watching the experts at NASA Goddard Space Flight Center in Greenbelt, USA a massive solar flare of class M, which is of medium size. When it came to be called a Coronal Mass Ejection (CME)
(High-energy plasma is released, consisting of electrons and protons and from heavy elements and x-rays)
According to calculations by the NASA scientists had touched us, the solar storm in the night from Saturday to Sunday.
Here again you registered everything that happened in space, because it was feared that the geomagnetic storms again lead to disorder cases. Then all affected telecommunications- & GPS-satellite would also be the power supply system.
Such as:
•In the summer of 2011 in which the research probe "Venus Espress" by ESA ran into turbulence, or was disrupted in December 2006, the satellite "Cluster II", "Envisat" and the gamma-ray observatory "Integral".
•The Japanese space agency JAXA lost "Adeos-2" by an eruption 2003.
•In 1989, the Canadian province of Quebec was laid paralyzed by power overloading and thereby caused a chaos. Traffic control systems, electrical systems and heating supplies many of the airports from here.
Advantage:
•The solar storms while reducing the space debris in which it expands the Earth`s atmosphere and the disconnected satellites, rocket remnants and other garbage back to earth will burn up and directed.
The ESA will provide an early warning system, among other things on their feet so operators can shut down on time-sensitive systems to avoid interference and to observe space weather better, such as asteroids and space debris.