Englisch Präsentation

Ich muss am Donnerstag eine Präsentation über meine “Dream Holiday” machen.

Kann jemand mir bitte Ratschlag geben wie ich besser schreiben kann oder ob ich Fehler habe.

DANKESCHÖÖÖN



My dream is to make honeymoon in Dubai.

For this presentation I have research all the information for make a holiday.

I will travel Dubai with my boyfriend during the Christmas holidays from 29.12.2011 to 03.01.2012.

It has several different ways to get there.
I would fly with the aircraft.
The flight lasts 5h30min and costs € 1,064.64 for 2 people.

Dubai is a beautiful location with plenty to see and you can visit to museums, mosques, villages, deserts and marketplaces.

It is not only a beautiful location, it is also rich in history and culture.

The possibilities are almost limitless, and I will rate you to do these 5 things when you travel to Dubai:

1.To visit the Dubai National Museum.
The Dubai museum is located on the Al Fahidi Fort, which was built in 1799. It gives you a (Überblick?) into the lives of those in the region with beautiful depictions of everyday life.

2.Dubai Dolphinarium is the first fully air conditioned indoor Dolphinarium in the Middle East.

3.BurJuman Centre has more than 300 prestigious stores including designer fashions such as Donna Karan, DKNY, Calvin Klein, Cartier, Rodeo Drive, Stuart Weitzman Polo Ralph Lauren, Escada, … as well as popular ready-to-wear apparel from NEXT & Guess. You can also choose from a wide selection of restaurants, a food court and cafes.

4.Deep sea fishing: Sea Hunters offer deep sea fishing and VIP fishing with their modern, spacious and remarkable comfortable yachts.

5.Gold and Spice: There are over 800 jeweler shops in both shopping malls.

I will stay in a hotel like:
Burj Al Arab Hotel
This hotel is 321 meters high and has several recreational opportunities.
It is the ONLY 7-star luxury hotel in the entire world.

The hotel cost for 2 person is 9.513,95 €.

I will rate you to make a holiday in dubai, because it is one of the luxuries places in whole world.