Short personal Letter // Kurz Durchlesen

Hi,
Ich musste als Hausaufgabe über die Ferien ein Brief schreiben,
In dem Brief schreibt ein Verlobter an seine Verlobte,welche die Hochzeit abrechen möchte.
Könntet ihr vllt kurz drüber fliegen wäre echt klasse!

Dear Sahja,
At First, how are you? I do not understand your decision! Everybody can get a passport normally, without any problems! After a long time, you will chancel our wedding now? I was waiting here in Bradford, since 12 years.
I have a job and earn enough money for our family. I thought you never had a problem with our different ages. It is normal that the men are older than the woman.
You shouldn’t chancel our wedding, please. My whole life would be destroyed. Perhaps I can get a passport for you, so you can come to me and we can talk about the problems. I think your decision is too zealous. Believe me,when you don’t marry me, you loss a very good chance. It is your best chance to have a nice life and many dreams can come true.
You should think another time about it. Maybe you are a bit confused because the dream of a family is near now. Please, don’t chancel this wedding. Lets give us a chance of a nice life!
I love you,

Ali

DANKE !