Schulman,Tom - Deads Poets Society: Correct the text, please

Hallo. Ab da mal an alle ne Bitte, die gerne Englisch korrigieren wollen.

Es ist echt wichtig, dass ich den Text ohne viele Fehler habe. Es reichen auch Teilaufgaben. Nicht erschrecken!
Bitte, Bitte, Bitte.

Aufgabe 1:

Parents: - have distrust ( haben Misstrauen)

Pupil: they like the teacher more and more ( out of Cameron); at the end they fight for Keatings teacher position, as they stand up ( Sie mögen ihren Lehrer mehr und mehr ( bis auf Cameron) ; am Ende kämpfen sie für Keatings Lehrerposition, indem sie alle aufstehen)

Teachers: find they lessonsmethods strange; want, thats Keating is a average teaching man; say, that he is cynic ( finden die Unterrichtsmethoden komisch; wollen, dass Keating ein Durchschnittlehrer ist; sagen, dass er ein Zyniker ist



Aufgabe 2:

In the afternoon, after school, the boys have a appointment in the cave. The Dead Poets Society talk about wishes and dreams. For example Knox tell the others, how big his love is to Chris and about his longing to Chris. So, the other boys explain, he is a “passionate experimenter”. Charlie want to be in possession of the cave, but the other boys are against, because everyone has a possession of the cave.
After the appointment, the boys go to the soccer field. Mr. Keating is the leader of this school activity. He waits for the boys. He checks , who is present and find out, that Neil and Watson are missing. Because he likes Neil, both didn’t becomes minus points. After that, he talks to the present ones, that they can decided, if there want to play soccer or making some exerises or not. If not, they can go. Mr. Keating gives the boys a slip of paper and said to them, that everybody has to read out the phrase, when they kick the ball in the goal. They play very long. As Todd goes back to the dorm, Keating shouts him, that he will get a turn, too. Todd is frustrated and sad. A short time later, Neil was coming. He hets a roll in the theatre play as a “Puck”. He’s very happy, but they want a signature of Mr. Nolan and Neil’s father. Neil’s solution: he make the signature. Todd is sceptical because Neils intention. At the next English lesson by Keating, Knox read out his poem. Knox think it is stupid, but Keating likes it. The second one is Todd, but he hasn’t got a poem. Keating provoke Todd a bit, because he said, that Todd doesn’t thinking about his fear of showing feelings and so Todd explain what he feels and composes something good one out of his mind. Todd self confidence grows and his teacher is very proud. Firstly Neil, than all of his class mates applauds.
The boys are in the cave again. Neil comes a bit later. Charlie makes music with his saxophon, he is a good musican. Knox want to phone Chris and run out of the cave.
So the meeting has a abrupt end and the other bosy goes on with Knox. They think, they have to help Knox, if he need support of his camerades. Knox is surprise and very happy, he gets an invitation to Chris party. But: if he want, he can come with a girlfriend.


Aufgabe 3:
Welton Society need girls

On behalf of the Dead Poets Society, we want to close a pending gap.
We are a group, which is devoting on language. With reading and writing poets, we have a new knowledge and more experiences. To be free of obligations and expectations take emotions a free course. It’s a liberation, relaxation and allevation for our souls. But that’s not all, in our club we derive power, are fond of life and draw of courage. We learn to seize the day and appreciate the life. Because every day can be the last one. The main reason of our club are flatter and win girls with a way of language, which is bringing girls melting. The Dead want to turn his wishes in aims and demand the Welton Society Academy to allow girls at Welton. Without they, our life is boring, only half as much beautiful. If we grow up 10 years without any girls and to have no conactions to their, how we can chose contacts to womens as an adult? There is no chance to be a hero of womens! In opposite, we have an effect as VERKLEMMTE. We want to impress and inspire the female sex, that’s the reason, why language and poetry exists. We have another reason, because we live in the 20. century. Schools only for boys and schools only for girls are come out fashion.
We want fun! We want to live!


Ich danke Euch so sehr!