Bitte mein Englischrefferat korrigieren :)

Hallo :]
Ich muss in Englisch ein Refferat über Dracula halten.
Habe mir jetzt erst mal auf Deutsch eine Zusammenfassung erstellt und dann versucht zu übersetzten.
Mit meiner Übersetzung bin ich ganz zufrieden ; nur die Grammatik ?
Bitte also um Hilfe !
Danke schon mal ;)


Dracula is a British horror movie from the year 1988 .
Director is Terence Fisher.
The film is based on the romance Dracula from Bram Stoker from the year 1897.
The leading roles play Christopher lee as Count and Peter Cushing than his opponent Van Helsing.
Count Dracula is the most famous vampire of literary history.

The History is about Dracula who wants no more longer wait in his old castle at the end of all days, but wants to move into the modern london .

This will help him, the young lawyer Jonatahn Harker, who travels to Transylvania to negotiate with the Count about about a House in London.
Harker is wondering that the count is only talk at night.
Scared he notes that Dracula Daytime sleep in a coffin , avoid sun and in a mirror he can not see him.
A Vampire.
Before Harker anything happens he quickly travels back to London.
Because of that, Count Dracula comes by himself in form of a wolf to London.
There he meets the young Lucy Westenraas, the best friend from Mina,the betrothed by Harker.
In a few days Dracula sucks the blood of the beautiful young woman and convicted she with this to be like himself.
When Dracula see Harker’s betrothed mina he remember to Elisabeth, his big love, who dies in the 15 th century.
Dr Seward thinks Lucy is sick because she is from day to day pale.
Perplexed he ask his old teacher professor van helsing for help.
Van Helsing also travelling to London for look by himself for these mysterious things and coming soon to the conclusion that the Reason is a vampire.Professor van Helsing, Dr. Seward, Jonathan Harker, Lucy Westenras engaged, Lord Godalming, and his amrikan friend Quincey Morris do hunt the vampire Dracula. Lucy can not be saved : They do not want that lucy becomes a Vampir so they beat a stake through her heart.
While this Harker marries Mina. But they couldn’t catch Dracula in London so he also bites Mina , which he wants to make to his wife.
They hunt Dracula until Transylvania up in front of them .
There he can [ hier fehlt mir noch etwas wie “unschädlich machen “ !?]
Dracula and his 3 female vampire by beating a staker through their heart and cut off their heads. As Dracula is dead , Mina is free from his Charm.