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hey leute musste in englisch eine summary schreiben aber bin mir nicht sicher ob es mir gelungen ist ich würde mich echt freuen wenn ihn jemand für mich korriegieren würde
dankee :D


The Story "Against the rules "is about a girl called Vivian who has a conflict with her parents about her first date.

Vivian is 16 years old .
She tells her parents that she has for the first time a date. But the parents are opposed because they think that it is still too early for them. And thereupon the Vivian is very sad and angry. She goes into her room. But her parents call and tell her she is going to date but only if other friends to go with.But it does not come naturally to ask the first date, but she just says yes is ok and pretend they would call a girlfriend. And one day Joey tells Vivian that he picks them up on saturday from home because he would like to know the parents. When the parents of vivien joey saw before the door they were in shock because they do not expect that he is a black. When joey his hand was Vivien`s father declined to give his hand too. And then went joey vivien and hand in hand. Vivien knew from the look what it is today to give this evening for consequenses for them.
Frage von Fatii | am 02.02.2010 - 18:06

 
Antwort von GAST | 02.02.2010 - 18:11
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würde dir ja gerne helfen aber ich bin selber so schlecht in englisch frag mal lieber englisch experten


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Antwort von Seraphimchild (ehem. Mitglied) | 02.02.2010 - 18:58
The Story "Against the rules "is about a girl called Vivian who has a conflict with her parents about her first date.

Vivian is 16 years old . She tells her parents that she has a date for the first time. But the parents are opposed because they think that it is still too early for them. And thereupon Vivian is very sad and angry. She goes into her room. But her parents call her to tell her she is allowed to go to the date but only if there are other friends who will be going with them.But it does not come naturally to ask the first date(was genau willst du damit ausdrücken?), but she just says yes and pretends that she would call a girlfriend. And one day Joey tells Vivian that he will pick her up on saturday from her home because he would like to get to know her parents. When the parents of vivien saw joey in front of the door they were in shock because they didn`t expect that he would be a black. Vivien`s father declined to give his hand to Joey when he extended his. And then joey and vivien left hand in hand. Vivien knew from the look what it is today to give this evening for consequenses for them.(diesen satz versteh ich auch nicht ganz...)

also ich würd sagen so müsst es eigentlich gehen bin aber auch kein englisch experte :)

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