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Frage: Songtext- Bitte kontrollieren!
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Ich habe einen neuen Song geschrieben und würde ihn gerne mal auf Grammatik überprüfen lassen

Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar <3

(Text 1):
Don`t cry, my tears don`t falling for you, Boy
Not anymore
It`s more important, than everything we looked for
It`s about my family, someone died
Why can`t you believe me?

(Refrain):
Don`t try to catch me, because I`m running
Because I`m already gone
Don`t try to stop me and say sorry because I`m hiding from you
Do you believe me now?

(Text 2):
I feel like I ran in the wrong direction
You`re still there and give me protection
But I don`t want you anymore
Why can`t you believe me?

(Refrain)

He was wright and he didn`t lie
And I feel badly
But there he comes with his new girl
He says sorry, no...
He said sorry...

(Refrain)

Already gone, Already gone...
He`s already gone...
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 05.01.2010 - 17:08


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Antwort von brabbit | 05.01.2010 - 17:13
Heißt es nicht don`t fall? In der ersten Zeile?

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Antwort von intelligenzbrot (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.01.2010 - 17:21
(Text 1):
Don`t cry, my tears don`t fall [oder "aren`t falling"] for you, Boy
Not anymore
It`s more important, than everything we looked for
It`s about my family, someone died
Why can`t you believe me?

(Refrain):
Don`t try to catch me, because I`m running
Because I`m already gone
Don`t try to stop me and say sorry because I`m hiding from you
Do you believe me now?

(Text 2):
I feel like I ran into the wrong direction
You`re still there and give me protection
But I don`t want you anymore
Why can`t you believe me?

(Refrain)

He was right and he didn`t lie
And I feel bad
But there he comes with his new girl
He says sorry, no...
He said sorry...

(Refrain)

Already gone, Already gone...
He`s already gone...

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