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bitte korrigiert mir eine ENglisch summary sehr dringend:-(

Frage: bitte korrigiert mir eine ENglisch summary sehr dringend:-(
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In the text ecxerpt … written by....
is about a girl named Marinela,which lived in a hard and heavy time.Marinela lived with her mother in EL Salvador during the period of ...(1960).At night she had often hear shots and see corpses on the way to the school moreover, they usually hid under her bed because there were bombings.In 1973 Marinela and her mother have arrived in Los Angeles.As she was 12 years-old actually Marinela spoke only spanish,but then she had to appear on in english.She became very good at school.Marinela was older,than she wanted to be a chemist,however she married later a chemist and foundet a family.After her seperation Marinela taught her sons. Spanish.As a conclusion Marinela recognises at the end that education is the only success in America.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 28.09.2009 - 19:26


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Antwort von Hawk | 28.09.2009 - 19:37
the text is about

who lived
she often heared shots at night and saw ...
hide
because they were bombed
in 1973 Marinela and her mother arrived to
When she was 12, she spoke panish only
when she had grown up, she got a wish to become a chemist
finally, Marinela recognises

angaben ohne gewaehr^^


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Antwort von isa. (ehem. Mitglied) | 28.09.2009 - 22:06
The Text [Titel] written by [Autor] is about a girl named Marinela,who lived in a hard and heavy time. She lived with her mother in EL Salvador during the period of ...(1960). At night she often heard shots and saw corpses on the way to the school. Moreover, they usually hide under her bed, because there were bombings.In 1973 Marinela and her mother arrived to Los Angeles. When she was 12 years-old, could only speak spanish,but then she had to speak english. She became very good at school. When Marinela had grown up, she wanted to become a chemist. However she married later a chemist and founded a family. [After her seperation Marinela taught her sons. Spanish. --> ?] At the end Marinela recognises that education is the only success in America.
Hoffe das stimmt ;)

 
Antwort von GAST | 28.09.2009 - 22:29
vielleicht ist difficult besser anstatt "hard and heavy"

 
Antwort von GAST | 28.09.2009 - 22:30
they moved to los angeles

 
Antwort von GAST | 28.09.2009 - 23:02
ganz wichtig simple present immer bei einer summary! hmm ganz schön viele fehler befinden sich in deinem text... versuche ein paar zu korrigieren....was meinstu mit ecxerpt?auszug vielleicht?

is about a girl named Marinela who has a difficult and hard live. In 1960 Marinela lives with her mother in EL Salvado At nights she often listen to shots and on her way to shool she have to pass corpses.
den nächtsten satz verstehe ich nicht... In 1973 Marinela and her mother move to LA.
At the age of 12 marinela speaks only spanish.But she has to learn english. When Marinele becomes older she decides to be a chemist. Later she marries also a chemist and establishs a family with him.After her divorce she taughts her son spanish. In the end Marinela draws the conclusion that education is the only way that lead to success.

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