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Englisch - Tagebuch - Bitte Fehler korrigieren!

Frage: Englisch - Tagebuch - Bitte Fehler korrigieren!
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Guten Tag,

ich soll ein Tagebuch für 7 Tage schreiben (kann ausgedacht sein).
Ich habe die Wochentage soweit fertig geschrieben und wollte einfach das ihr nochmal drüber guckt und vllt. meine Fehler korrigiert. Wäre sehr nett, danke!

Hier meine Texte (pro Tag sollen ca. 1/2 - 1 A5 Seite sein)

Hier der Text (war zu lang): https://pastebin.com/py13QTuA
Gerne könnt ihr auch Verbesserungsvorschläge schreiben, ich bin in der 7. Klasse und habe ein paar Sätze mit Pons Übersetzer geschrieben und wollte daher auch fragen ob das zu sehr auffällt oder ob die Sätze ok für einen 7. Klässler sind und ob die Länge der Tage auch so passt.
Vielen Dank!

MFG
Frage von IchBinAnonym | am 18.05.2019 - 11:13


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 18.05.2019 - 21:32
Monday:
Today I got up very early because I had to go to school, I don’t like school.
It was boring at school, because we did nothing which I am interested in. I was tired after school, so I slept for a long time and ate lunch afterwards. After lunch, I did my homework.
Then I played computer games with my friends, that makes a lot of fun . After playing I went to bed early because I have school in the morning . Before I went to sleep , I read a book, which I enjoy very much.

Tuesday:
Today I had to get up very early again because I had to go to school . Today we had to prepare a presentation , that was very difficult, but it was fun . After school I took the school bus home, where I had lunch first . After eating , I did my homework and afterwards I cleaned up my room which took a lot of time. Then I had pizza for dinner. When I finished eating , I studied for a school test. Before I went to bed I took a shower . Then I fell asleep in bed because it was a difficult day.

Wednesday:
Today I had to go to school later , that was very cool because I could sleep longer . It was very cool at school today because we were only painting . I like it, because I’m very good at painting. In the breaks , I talked a lot with my friends about computer games, because my friends and I are greatly interested in computer games. After school , I did my homework, that’s boring . In the afternoon I was alone at home , so I played computer . After that , I had dinner . In the evening I made a present for my grandpa . I went to bed early .

Thursday:
Today was a cool day . At school , we only did maths, that’s cool because I’m very good in it. I went shopping after school . In the afternoon my grandpa was at our house . I gave him my present and he was very happy with it .Then we played chess for a long time . I won, because I’m very good in chess, too . Then we ate dinner .Later my grandpa went home, because he is very old and must be sleep earlier than younger people . Then I watched a film with my mother . The film was very cool .Then I went to bed because I was very tired .

Friday:
Today was the last school day of the week . I have talked a lot with my friends about what we will do on the weekend . After school , I had football training . Then I took a shower . In the evening I went to the cinema with my friends . They were late, but not to late to see the film . The film was very cool . Afterwards we went shopping in the city . We bought some new clothes, which costed much money. I bought it from my pocket money. It was a great evening . After that , I went home . I was very tired , so I slept .

Saturday:
Today I could sleep very long because it`s the weekend. After getting up, I ate breakfast. Then I watched TV. After watching TV, I talked to my boyfriend on the phone. Then I cooked lunch. After cooking, I ate lunch. Afterwards I had to clean up the kitchen. Later I biked with my friends. After the trip I was very tired and slept for a long time. Then I played football with my father and next I had dinner. Then I played computers with my friends. It was very late when I went to bed.

Sunday:
Today I had to get up early because I had to go to church. I don’t like the church, because it’s very boring, but my father said that I had to go to church. After church I cooked and ate lunch. Afterwards I went cycling with my family. It was very cool, but I was very tired after cycling. Next we played family games together and then we ate dinner. After dinner, we watched TV for a long time. It was 11:00 pm when I went to bed. Before I fell asleep, I read a book.


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Antwort von IchBinAnonym | 19.05.2019 - 15:39
Dankeschön meine Schwester hat es auch nochmal überarbeitet!

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