Endlisch the reader Korrektur (wichtig)

Hallo,

ich hab eine kurze Zusammmenfassung von the reader gemacht, könnt ihr mal bitte Korrektur lesen?
Ich bin mir unsicher mit der Zeit und wechsele glaube ich zu oft und auch mit dem Satzbau bin ich mir nicht sicher! habt ihr vielleicht bessere Übersetzungen für Wörter?

Dankeschön!

“The reader” by Berhardt Schlink tells a story about the relationship between the 15 years old boy named Michael Berg and the 38 years old woman named Hanna Schmitz.
When Michael has got the prolonged illness, he meets the working-class woman and makes in the context of a love relationship his first sexual experience. Moreover, he reads her regularly from different books out. This relationship rudely interrupts when Hanna leaves Michaels´ hometown. Years later Michael, who is now a law student, meets Hanna as a defendant in a trial against Jews during the Nazi regime again. Hanna gets life imprisonment, because she didn`t tells the truth, in order to hush up her illiteracy. During the prison term Michael keeps the relationship to Hanna maintained, by sending her recordings of his books, although Hanna learns to read and write.In prison Hanna also deals intensively with the subject of the holocaust. One day before Hanna should released from prison she commits suicide.