englisch- kontrolle wegen grammatik :S

hey, ich habe hier einen text geschrieben und muss den morgen abgeben... könnte den jemand kurz nach fehlern nach gucken? wäre super :)

schon mal lieben danke :D
(inhaltlich ist egal...nur die grammatik..puuh..)

First of all I think that the girl is a typical American tourist.
(Yet (allerdings) I do not know what is a typical American tourist?!)
I can imagine that in the USA is Europe as a “fine” destination.
Many students travel with a rucksack through Europe and they will learn the cultural before or during their studies.
Many Americans think that Europe is only one land. Europe stand for sophisticated, high culture, noblesse and intellectualism.
(Young American tourists are usually open-minded and looking for spiritual enrichment.)
It seems to me that the girl will go through the lands culture. Of course she will have fun in her travel. So I think, that the girl’s trip was relative typical for a young girl.