kontrolle meiner diskussion auf englisch

Ich schreibe am Donnerstag eine Englisch Klausur und hab in Vorbereitung auf diese schon eine Diskussion geschrieben, da ich das Thema ungefähr weiß. Allerding bin ich leider eine Englisch- Niete und bitte daher um Kontrolle meines Textes, aber bitte nihct lachen *hihi


I want to speak about the advantages and disadvantages of go an exchange. First I want to describe the disadvantages. I think it is important to consider that you can get certain diseases of certain regions in the world. Moreover the crime might be higher than in Germany. For that reason it is important to inform about terrow areas and cautions before you start your trip. Also you can get into conflict with the law, when you do not inform about the rules of your destination. Maybe you need more money than at home or you might feel homesick when your trip go longer than a week-long. Besides you might dislike the food in the country where you want to stay. At last reason for do not go an exchange is that the people or the hotel disappoint you.
But there are also some advantages of go an exchange, for example you can get to know a new culture or tradition. Moreover you can learn a new language or improve your knowledge of your foreign language. Of course you meet new people and maybe you make friends with them. In your destination you can have a look at the sights of the area or you can participate in sport activities which are new to you or in which you are good at.
All in all I know there are more disadvantages than advantages, but I would like to go an exchange because I want to make new experience.