I have a Dream

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ich wolle euch fragen ob ihr mein text lesen könnt und ihn vll verbessert oder am besten mir tipps geben könnt was ich noch besser machen kann....

ich habe folgende aufgabe gehabt : point out what king says about the situation of black in america in the past and their situation today(1963)

und hier ist mein text :

In the following speech „I have a Dream“ written by Martin Luther King was published on 28 august 1963, deals withe the situation of black people in america.

In the past the black people have a bad life.
The have been discriminate and were not free. Black people life was horrible,because the live in America as an exil.
King thinks that this situation it is not right, because the Constitution and Declaration of Independence have the same civil rights for all people that means for white and black. Therefore it is time to change this : make real democracy and make justice a reality for all chosen people / (to all of GodŽs children). Moreover King says that „we“ can not alone, we must hold together to create a better life for everyone. The peolpe can not be satisfied as long as the black peole have not the same rights and suffering.