Summary of an newspaper report

Hi ich muss von den ersten vier Papagraphen eine Inhaltsangabe machen

Link http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/africa/south-africas-new-school-oath-revives-the-divisions-of-apartheid-787290.html

So und hier die short summary:
The first four Paragraphs of the newspaper report “South Africa’s new school oath revives the division of apartheid”, written by Ian Evans in Cape Town on Tuesday the 26th February 2008, deals with a circumscription of the new school oath as well as argumentation and citation of Mr.
Mbeki and the minister of Education Naledi Pandor.
At the beginning, in paragraph one, the description of the modern school oath starts, which creates opposing views in South Africa.
After that, the readers are informed that the new oath rests upon on white schoolchildren, but pendants think, that it represents the national pride and South Africa.
Then follows the argumentation of Mr. Mbeki, who says, that the youth will be recited by teachers in their morning school fittings as well as the human solidarity and conduct will inaugurated.
Finally, follows parts of the citation of the minister of Education Naledi Pandor, which implies, that the era of apartheid can not be forgotten.

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LG AlbertEinstein