Bewerbung in englisch

Organization and creativity are my strengths

als ersatz für I am organizational ability and very creative.

ich bins mal durchgegangen, ist aber KEINE perfekte lösung so :
Next year i have my high school diplomy and want to work abroad.
besser:
I`m going to do (?) my High School Diploma (wenn du abitur meinst, schreib lieber abitur, sonst könnts verwirrungen geben.) next year and I would like to word abroad afterwards.

Therefore I would like/want (warum should - du wirst doch nicht gezwungen^^) to apply for the position of a receptionist at/in (?) the Holiday Inn Resort.
I think I am well qualified for this position, because I have a good command of the English language.
Furthermore I am independent but also willing to work in a team. My organizational/organising (AE/BE) ability and my creativity could be a great oportunitiy (?) for your team.

I would be pleased to come for an interview at any time. (klingt noch ein bissl komisch)

hoffe ich konnte dir helfen, der rest, den ich nicht nochmal abgeschrieben hab, ist für mich okay :)
kleiner tipp für die zukunft: http://dict.leo.org - löst (fast) all probleme^^

Bewerb mich auch grad fürs Ausland. Ich habs nochmal ganz geschrieben.

Dear Sir or Madam,
i am a student from Köln, Germany (hier kannst du vllt noch schreiben von welcher Schule und welche Fächer dich da interessieren). Next year i will finish grammar school and would really like to work in a foreign country.
Last year i visited your hotel (hier is noch Platz zum schleimen was dir besonders gut gefallen hat^^) and i also work as often as possible in a hotel in Köln (?).
Therefor i would like to apply for a position as a receptionist at your Holiday Inn Resort.
I am independent and love to work in team. And also because of my good English i am qualified for this job.
Additionally I have good organizational skills and i am very creative.
I would like to convince you of my engagement and motivation in an personal interview.

Yours sincerely, ...